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Analysis Of Dumpster Diving By Lars Eighner

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The “Monkey Garden” descriptive writing was one of the most beneficial daily assignments that we have done all year. We received a paper to fill in different categories including images, sounds, emotions etc. After analyzing the writing of Sandra Cisneros we received the chance to do a free write about our favorite place. I thought this process was beneficial because of how we listened to her writings and had to pick out the details when we heard them. When Mrs. Rowe gave us the chance to write our own story, it helped to solidify the recognition of rhetoric within an author’s piece. It helped me use the word choice in the text to figure out the tone of the author, it is similar to reading between the lines. I got the chance to capture a …show more content…

Which brings me to the next brainstorming strategy I used, I listed all the questions I could relate to that body paragraph and answered all of them. I found both of these strategies to be quite helpful and were very productive. The biggest problem I had writing this paper was the verbosity, I was trying to get to the point and ended up just confusing myself and those who read it for me. To fix my problem I read allowed the essay many times until I could find the perfect medium that sounded right. A strength within my essay would be how in depth the understanding of the text is while the weakness is the length of the text. I learned that I can write a longer essay without trying to drag it on. In most texts there is enough information to fill up the pages, you just need to dig deeper and find the information.

Subject-Related Questions I found that the author is quite biased towards parents, Marano generalizes them in an unhealthy way. I have experienced over-protective parenting within my family and seen how it can destroy trust within a family. I found controversy when she never mentioned anything about parents who help their children succeed in life. While I understand that it was not her topic, she still should have addressed it instead of making a hasty generalization of all parents. When writing this paper I found myself confused on Hara Marano's credentials and the evidence she uses to support her claims. In the beginning of the text it wrote that while she is

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