In my everyday life I strive to be the best person that I can be, I try to be my own person, and try not to care about what anyone thinks about me. Although this is the motto I try to live by, it is not always the case. I used to do gymnastics, and once all of my friends found out the completely made me feel like I was nothing. They made fun of me day and night. As a result of this, I quit, and yet I thought these guys were my friends. I know for sure that i'm not the only person in the work that this is happened to. Take Bobby for example, he is a water boy for a college football team and as you may already know, being a water boy isn’t the best idea, especially if you are a 31 year old man water-boying for a college football team. Ever …show more content…
Bobby completely snaps and goes and tackles the quarterback. The coach of the football team ( coach klein) realizes this is what Bobby is made for. All that anger building up after all these years makes him the perfect football player. This show that even though Bobby is a complete outcast, coach Klein is optimistic to let Bobby show what he is really made of. Coach Klein has realized a hidden talent of bobby’s, and encourages him to play for the team to see if he could help Bobby find something that he is very good at and to help him find his place on the team. This paragraph was half decent. I attempted to fix up some minor errors and try to furthe explain what is going on like you said on my feedback. I also tried to fix up all of the convention erros i could possibly find. Overall I think I change this paragraph from a decent one to a pretty good one. As Bobby starts playing football, it doesn't really help with the friend problem, but It helps Bobby feel as if he belongs to something, like he really is a part of a team. As if he has meaning, as if he has a purpose to be there. As a benefit to playing football, Bobby is also getting a college education. In Bobby’s very first class he gets asked a very tough question and without hesitation, Bobby answers with, “Mama says the allegations are always so mad because they got all them teeth but no toothbrush.” ( The Water boy ; Frank Coraci) and everyone starts laughing and making fun of him.
One main literary device used in “American History” by Judith Ortiz-Cofer is archetype. The first archetype in this story is the playground bully who picks on the narrator. The narrator says that she was “taking a lot of abuse from the black girls for not turning the rope hard and fast enough for them” (Ortiz-Cofer 202). She also says one of the girls was “the biggest of the black girls” (Ortiz-Cofer 202) and encouraged the others to call her “pork chop” (Ortiz-Cofer 202).
Lennie and George are one of the most popular kinds of the duo archetypes. Lennie’s the strong one, he can lift bags of barley better than any other tag-team could. He’s beefy, taller than most, easily noticeable in a crowd. And as the archetype usually goes, the not as smart one, he relies heavily on George, and if not for George he would most likely be in horrible situations all the time, even more so than he was in the book. George is the smart one and the leader, havin’ all the plans for success and givin’ all the directions for burley over there. Small, he is, even if it doesn’t show as much as people would have thought in the movie. He is also cynical, or perhaps apprehensive may be a better term, to everyone but Lennie at first met. Together they create the archetype that’s often in mystery stories.
An archetype is a recurrent symbol or motif in literature. There are situational archetypes and character archetypes. I am going to be talking about the situational archetype Quest and the character archetype the Initiate. The Initiate is the underdog of the story, the hero that has to go through a little training. The Quest is a search for someone or something. Author Ingrid Law uses these two archetypes in the novel Savvy.
An archetype is a type of character found across multiple books and or movies. John Steinbeck wrote the novel Of Mice and Men. Within this novel, there is a character named Lennie Smalls. Lennie is a unique character because of his mental disability. Lennie has a best friend named George, who promises Lennie’s Aunt Clara that he would take care of Lennie when she passes away. Lennie is very strong and throughout the book it is shown how his disability and strength are used against him. Steinbeck’s character from Of Mice and Men, Lenny, is the typical example of an innocent archetype.
Much of their pride stems from knowing how much potential they used to have. It eats away at them thinking about how “legendary” they were in their youth. Santiago’s pride is what motivates him to continue the pursuit of the marlin into the deep and dangerous sea. while away, Santiago daydreams about fishing days of his youth. This adventure reminds Santiago of his glorious youth and gives him hope that he might be the fisherman he once was. This hope comes alive once more when he catches the marlin. Shortly after the success of catching the prized marlin, the bad luck comes back and sharks begin to attack it. Reflecting on what is happening Santiago blames his pride. “Fish that you were. I am sorry that I went too far out. I ruined us both.” (Hemingway, pg. 115) The abundance of confidence Santiago felt that he could catch this fish so far out rooted from his pride. Being so far away from help and supplies drained him mentally and physically.Santiago returns, frail and weak. Bobby’s downfall is similar to Santiago’s in that they both stem from pride. In a preseason scrimmage Bobby was taken out and his knee was severely injured. Two options were proposed by the doctor. Do physical therapy with a minor surgery and risk an even worse re-injury. Or end his high school football career and get the surgery he needed. Bobby didn’t want to risk anyone else taking his “star” status, so he chose to risk further injury and keep playing. The second option gave Bobby hope that he could return to glory and be the player he once was. Unfortunately, it was evident to everyone that he was not the player he used to be. Permian coaches either benched him for most or all of the game. After a few games of less and less playing time Bobby couldn’t take not being the star anymore. Pride and an oversized ego caused Bobby to quit the team. Losing football started a downward spiral for Bobbythat sent him to rock bottom. Pride
An archetype is a pattern or model that nearly all things are copied from or based off of and is widely recognizable. One of the most prominent storylines that reoccur in literary works is “rags to riches.” In this archetypal story, the protagonist rises from poverty to wealth. An example would be The Pursuit of Happyness. In this movie, single father, Chris Gardner gets evicted from his apartment after getting sole custody of his five-year-old son, Christopher. With no place to go, Chris gets a job as an unpaid intern at a prestigious brokerage firm to compete with nineteen other interns for a paid broker position. Despite getting the internship, Chris and his son must live in shelters and endure hardships together. After living in poverty
In Homers epic poem “The Odyssey” there are many archetypes, many of which were the origin of the archetype. An archetype is a character type, place, or symbol, every culture shares. In “The Odyssey” Homer uses archetypes to evoke meaning to the story. Some examples of archetypes in “The Odyssey” are the temptress, and the father-son conflict.
One important feedback was to make my assignment concise, so I will not use the 10% extra on the word count limit. I think I have achieved this goal as this assignment word count did not exceed the requirement. I was able to do so by writing first the main idea of each of the paragraphs, and after that I expanded the information I am providing a little by little, until I almost reached the required word count. Another important feedback was to use a spell and a grammar checkers, which I did now by using a
My favorite scene in the book is in chapter 11, during Halloween, when Penelope told Junior that she was going trick or treat to ask for only spare change tonight instead, of candy, and give the spare change to the homeless. Suddenly, Junior suggested, “Why don’t we pool more money tomorrow and send it together? We’d be able to give twice as much.” (page: 78) Later, Junior goes trick or treating, and he asked for spare change and some even gave him spare change and candy. However, there were lots of people that slammed their doors on him. “When walking home, three guys jumped him. They were wore Frankenstein masks and shoved him to the ground and started to kick him a few times. Mostly they just wanted to remind me that I was a traitor. And
They recruit guys from soccer, basketball, a farm and even other football teams to come and play for them. Lengyel has a new vision for Marshall, and calls them the “Young Thundering Herd.” Jack is the person to do things that most coaches wouldn’t do because that just in his personality. As a result he seeks out help from Bobby Bowden, the coach of the University of West Virginia. Jack asks him “if He and Dawson can see the coaches’ videos, plays, and handbooks and even if he had any tips for them.” Bowden laughs at first and asks “if Jack was serious…” He then see that the men are serious and allows them to view the tapes, rules, handbooks and anything else they wanted. He does this because Bowden understands that a team is in grief and confusion. When this happens Dawson’s disbelief that he had about the team and Jack trying to help changes and he becomes a little bit more optimistic about the future of Marshall and the town.
Once there was a woman who told a story. However, she had more than just an entertaining tale to tell. She chose common images that everyone would understand, and she wrapped her story around them, and in this way she was able to teach the people . . .
In sports and in school sometimes I’ve been made fun of and I wanted to change that. My dad said to stand up for yourself because your not going to get anywhere in life if you’re too shy to do anything about it. Standing up for yourself is a great life lesson because it gives you the qualities to become a better person. School matters for your college and job, sports matter if you want to get a schlorship, and standing up for yourself will always help you become
I enjoyed reading your revision. The beginning sentence flows better than the first one in the original paragraph. This topic sentence gets me hooked for the rest of the paragraph to figure out what you are going to do to solve this problem that all students have including me every semester. The rest of revision is good, except all the sentences have the same structure and the revision might be better with more vary.
Carl Jung described archetypes as important recollections of the past human experiences that are present in the unconscious mind in a combined form. Here, we describe these archetypes as patterns and images, which are actualized by the conscious mind in a number of forms, when viewing the outside world.
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