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Assignment On Income Inequality : Extinction Of The American Dream

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My intension for all of my essay assignments during this semester were to have strong supporting examples for the thesis statements, use proper grammar, and choose good advanced words to show more professional mind. With good advises from Smarthinking tutors, my dad, and my peers, I have progressed my papers toward better essays. I have saved my papers individually as I corrected them to show the progressions.
In my argumentative essay, Income Inequality: Extinction of the American Dream, I used my summary and response paper as my draft. The summary and response paper contained each essays’ summaries related to income inequality from the They Say I Say book that greatly influenced my argumentative essay. As I wrote the essay, I made sure my dad to help me correct any grammar mistakes that I have made.
Through the Smarthinking tutoring, I have been told my argumentative essay’s strength was that I included many strong relevant information about income inequality in my introduction that helped me give my readers a background idea about it. The tutor said that my thesis statement was not specific enough for it to serve as a guide for my readers throughout the paper, but I believe I had a good thesis statement by saying “I believe that inequality is one of the biggest political and economic challenges that greatly threatens American Dream today.” Therefore, I kept my statement as the way it was.
What I have really enjoyed during this essay was when we did a group discussion that

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