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Becoming Valedictorian Analysis

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Class of 2015
“Ready, begin,” I said. Two words. I worked so hard for four years, spent a tremendous amount of hours doing homework, and participated in school activities and sports. I always tried to be the best person I could and my reward was just to say those two words. I, Kylie Ergeson graduated Selah High School with a 4.0 GPA and was the valedictorian of the Class of 2015. Many people think grades come easy for me. Well, they are wrong. I worked hard to get good grades. I set my goal of being valedictorian in 8th grade, and with determination and perseverance I achieved it. Along my journey to becoming valedictorian, I faced many obstacles. First, I got bullied a lot. Being bullied was the reason I got suspended my freshman year. I had …show more content…

Having good grades did not come easy for me. I had to pay attention in class, do my homework, and study for hours preparing for tests. I wish it had come easy for me, so that I would have saved a lot of time and unneeded stress. If I did not understand something I would come before school or stay after school until I mastered it. My teachers probably hated me because I came and saw them frequently. I did not go out and party in high school because on weekends I studied. I spent so much time on my homework, making it perfect. I was determined to get good grades, and if that meant staying home to study instead of going out with my friends, I chose studying. I would also watch YouTube videos if I did not understand a topic. Almost every night in high school when I was taking college math I went home and did practice problems off of YouTube until I understood it. My senior year of high school there was a class called STAT, which was 30 minutes where you could do your homework and ask teachers any questions you had. What did most people do? Sit in the cafeteria and socialize. Where was I? In the classroom doing my homework. My teachers always told me, “Your hard work will pay off in the long run”. This phrase has always kept me …show more content…

I was crying so hard I could barely see, and my heart was pounding out of my chest. I got to the hospital and his family was already there waiting for a doctor to come out. We all sat together and cried and prayed that he would by okay. All the doctor said was that there was severe head trauma. Right then I thought he was brain dead. They took CAT scans and found out that there was not really severe head trauma but a severe concussion. I went into the cold, weird medicine smell room to see him and I just froze. There were machines everywhere, so many things connected to him, a tube down this throat, and a neck stabilizer. There was blood all over his face, and his blond hair was brown from being covered in dirt. They said he would have died if he had not been wearing a helmet. He was in the ICU in a medically induced coma for six days. He had a severe concussion, pneumonia from vomiting, then inhaling it into his lungs, a collapsed right lung full of fluid, and T-4 through T-7 bones in his back broken. He had tubes down his throat to help him breathe, a tube down to his stomach for food, IV’s everywhere, a neck brace, and he was strapped down to the bed because when they would wake him up, he would try to pull all the tubes out. His room smelt like old bleach and smelly hospital food. I missed a week of school and was falling behind. I did not want to leave the hospital because I did not want anything to happen

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