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Best In Class By Margaret Talbot

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Top students across the nation compete for the title of valedictorian each year, although very few actually receive it. Much to the detriment of the students, the competition can become sophomoric and pointless yet remaining intense and cut throat. In her article, “Best In Class”, Margaret Talbot conveys the message that the competition of valedictorian has unfavorable consequences through her use of diction and testimonies.

Talbot uses strong diction to show that valedictorians are an unnecessary part of high school through uses of language such as “what Davies had done was a sneaky way of gaming the system”. In this specific quote, Talbot’s use of the word “sneaky” implies that what Davies did was immoral and wrong and makes one think of Davies as fox-like and corrupt when, in all reality, he was just a young boy who understood how the educational system works and how he could make it work for him. She also uses the word “gaming” instead of something like “playing” or “using” to make the reader connect Davies to a stereotypical, lazy, doesn’t-care- about-anything teenager. The effect this has is to make the reader believe Davies didn’t deserve the title of valedictorian, which, by discrediting Davies, bridges out to her overall message that having a valedictorian is a useless endeavor by showing that people who get it don’t really deserve it while those who do deserve it don’t get it. Another powerful use of diction that conveys to Talbot’s message can be found when

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