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Comparing The Black Rat And The Photograph

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During times of war, it is inevitable for loss to be experienced by all. In the poems “The Black Rat” and “The Photograph” written by Iris Clayton and Peter Kocan respectively, the idea of loss is explored through an omniscient narrator recalling a soldier’s involvement in warfare. While Clayton writes of a soldier’s abrupt loss of hope and how this experience negatively affects his life, Kocan explores how the loss of a loved one affects a family sixty years later. While both poems incorporate similar techniques in imagery and narration, the time setting for each poem is different as “The Black Rat” is set in Tobruk, Libya during World War 2 and “The Photograph” is set during World War 1.

Although Clayton does not explore the idea of loss until the second stanza, she sets the scene of “The Black Rat” using imagery, acquainting the reader with a nameless soldier and his poor living conditions. The soldier is referred to as a “Rat of Tobruk”, indicating the location of the soldier and the environment in which he fights “for his land” in World War 2. In the …show more content…

This is highlighted through Clayton’s use of rhyme as the last two verses - “The Anzac marches he badly neglected,” and “Would show to his comrades how he was rejected” - are especially important as the reader realises that the soldier is now an outcast in both the white and black communities. In response to this rejection, the soldier “sold all his medals he once proudly wore” as “They were of no use to him any more”. Like Clayton’s poem, the melancholic tone of “The Photograph” is the same as the one in “The Black Rat” despite the vastly different events unfolding. Kocan’s poem takes a turn for the worst as it describes what happens to the family once they are informed of Jim’s death, using a hyperbole technique in “Makes something die in all of them” in reference to the family’s reaction to the news of his

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