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Creative Writing: 9/11

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Tears streamed down my face as I dialed 911. “Wake up Mommy,” said Taylor through her tears as she hugged my mom’s twitching body. “911, what’s the emergency?” asked a lady’s voice through our old silver phone.
“M-m-my mom, she passed out and won’t respond,” I said trying to keep myself steady.
“Okay sweetie where are you?” said the woman with her thick southern drawl.
“I’m at my house, 2231 Appleberry Lane Hollowpond, Missouri.”
“I sent an ambulance, would you like me to stay on the phone with you?”
“No thankyou I-I’m fine.”I hung up and ran to my mom.
“They’re coming to help you, Mama,” then I looked at my sister, tears strolled down her cheeks and her eyes glimmered with worry, “Taylor grab some clothes and whatever you don’t want …show more content…

“Shh. I will tell you when we are there.” “I wanna know now!” Taylor yelled still talking in a whiney tone. “Taylor do you want to eat raw chicken for the rest of your life?” I snapped at her. “Ew, no.” she said. “Then follow me and quit …show more content…

We were walking for a few hours. My feet throbbed and my ears were ringing from Taylor’s whining. Finally I could see it, the old abandoned house I discovered one day while riding my bike. The door was barely hanging onto its hinges, and there were several windows missing or broken. I pried open the splintering oak door. In the house there was two rooms. One, the one you first enter, was most likely a kitchen and living room. There was a sofa with faded fabric and springs popping out everywhere. An old furnace sat in the corner with rotting charcoal inside. The door of the furnace was missing rendering the whole thing useless. The other room was much smaller. It was a bedroom. There was a twin sized bed. The frame was rusty and missing a leg. I pulled the mattress off of it, so we could sleep on it. There were springs and stuffing sticking out of the mattress. It wasn’t too dirty to sleep on because I pulled off the moldy sheets. We laid down on the mattress. Taylor started snoring within minutes. I was worried about Mom. She had had a seizure before. It was because of her failing liver. Last time, social services took me and my sisters to a girl’s home. They served cooked vegetables that smelled like rotten seafood and chicken noodle soup with frozen chicken. After Mom got out of the hospital she got custody of us, but the judge told her if it happened again she wouldn’t get us back. My older sister, Becca, was eighteen so she didn’t have to

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