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Creative Writing: POV Of Ennis

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Jack is standing left of centre of the frame with his truck behind him. The truck is parked at a slight angle. This is a long shot at eye level from the POV of Ennis. A grey brick building is behind the truck. The building is a pale grey except towards the top of the building where above the top of Jack’s hat it is shadowed. Towards the right of the building in the background the green field and blue sky are visible. Jack is now in full view with his jean shirt tucked into blue jeans and a brown belt displaying a silver buckle. He is wearing dark western boots. Jack is turning around from his truck to look at Ennis. As his hat casts a shadow over his face, he looks towards Ennis. This is the first time Jack sees Ennis and he slowly takes him in. Jack takes four slow steps forward while still looking at Ennis, as he does so the shadow cast over his face retreats. Each step is accompanied by the crunching sound of boots on gravel. This is …show more content…

Jack stands two-thirds within the frame with his shoulder going offscreen right. This is a close-up shot with Jack’s hat going offscreen top. Jack begins to look down. First his eyes close and then this hat moves down blocking the top half of his face. The hat again casts a shadow over his face as well as one of his shoulders. The other shoulder remains in the sun. Jack turns to the right of the frame. The camera pans right with his movement. His face is now in the centre of the frame as he looks offscreen right. His hat casts a dark shadow over his head and part of his body but each shoulder remains lit by sun. He takes one step. Jack now has his back turned to Ennis. The occasional low amplitude sound of birds chirping joins the ongoing ambient sound of the wind blowing. Like the wind, the bird chirps continue on and off for the rest of the scene. Each step by Jack continues to make the sound of boots on gravel. Cut

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