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Essay On The Basketball Team

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The author takes a transition from the early positive position centered around comradery to explain the offseason losses the program has suffered within the past year. Losing long-term captain Shea Weber in a trade for the younger P.K. Subban and then soon after, losing Weber’s replacement Mike Fisher due to retirement. Ryan Ellis is out due to a knee injury and James Neal was taken in the Las Vegas expansion draft. Frederick Gaudreau and Pontus Aberg did not make the roster despite top performance in the playoffs. Rexrode gives no evidence or further explanation for these player loses and I believe an explination to why losing these men could be so crucial to the franchise. Rexrode will follow the conversation about the team’s …show more content…

To write a piece on if another championship being “on the table” more sustainable evidence would need to be presented. While the evidence given was fine and helped the reader grasp the uncertainty about this team going forward it is the evidence not given which is concerning. He acknowledges that other teams have a much narrower range of speculation but doesn’t get into any other organizations business besides the reminding the reader James Neal was taken from the Predators by the new Las Vegas Golden Knights. Along with avoiding coverage on other teams in their division or conference, Rexrode said very little about why the Predators would return or not this year to the playoffs. Analyzing the article I believe the author spoke to his audience with too much hope that they would understand the magnitude this offseason will have on this’s proformance. Unfortunantly, I found this article lacking of evidence to support the claims rather than the evidence being present proving to be false. With such polar claims to being addressed in this article, one would hope the author could provide more backing evidence. Furthermore, since he chose not to personally take a on the subject I believe he should have provided even more evidence then to back his informational piece from both sides. I think the conversation that not only was a new team entered into the league this August but that it happened in the

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