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External Forces And The Application Process

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“You got into UCLA! How? When? Why?” The path to attend my dream university peaked when I was admitted to UCLA. This quote, however, was only a minimal representation of what my four years of high school were actually like. There were many external negative forces that would hinder my ability to succeed. These external forces led to many of my negative internal forces. Alongside the institutional barriers and bureaucratic obstacles, I reached a point where I did not want to make my dream a reality. Nevertheless, I had much more positive external forces that I believe allowed me to prosper and attain my goal. The negative external forces stemmed from the discrimination I endured, being a first-generation Mexican-American. This, I …show more content…

Each small learning community wanted certain funding for their programs, which led to limited course options and fewer academic success resources, such as tutoring, one-on-one sessions with counselors and the inability to make connections with faculty because everyone was “replaceable”. Once the changes proved to be lacking, my school went back to the original system. This left me with a new set of teachers, administration, and students, since many had become discontent with the “improved” school system and withdrawn from my high school. I was behind in credits and had no one to guide me in fulfilling my A-G requirements. It was not until my junior and senior years of high school that I had teachers and counselors who had a genuine interest in the success of their students. They were my mentors and sparked the passion in me to succeed and obtain knowledge so that maybe one day I could change someone’s life the way that they changed mine. Once I was determined to prosper and attend a four-year institution, I still had to think about the underlying barriers, which included the lack of parental support, since they were both resistant to the idea of having their last child move away from home. Another common barrier I had to think about was money. My parents’ lack of salary discouraged me from applying to college because I knew that they would not be able to send me far. However, my sisters encouraged me to apply for the Gates Millennium Scholarship. I was

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