Friendship

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(1) I want to talk about friendship. Friends can change your life. So, you must know who is a real friend. Firstly, your friend must understand you and of course, you must understand her, too. I think, another important point in a friendship is confidence. You mustn 't tell lies to each other. In addition, you must say everything about yourself. I think these are important for a friendship. If you have a friend like this, you don 't break up with her because a real friend is not found easily.
Friends play great roles in our lives so we must know our friends. Firstly, your friend must
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Sentence Spinning / Rewriting Types
A good spun article possesses a natural, diverse mix of sentence types. All 10 types should occur with equal frequency throughout the document.
Below are the basic types, with a couple examples for each.
1. Simple sentence rewrites * “I always take my dog out after work.” * “My dog needs to go out every single evening after work.”
2. Compound sentence rewrites (comma + conjunction or occasional semicolon) * “I take my dog for a walk an hour after work, andboy does he love it!” * “My dog Max is my best friend; we go for walks every evening.”
3. Complex sentence rewrites (dependent clause(s) + independent clause(s)) * “When I get home from work, I usually take my dog for a walk outside.” * “Although Max’s high energy level is one of my favorite things about him, it means he needs to go for a walk every single night.”
4. Two sentence rewrites (any combo of simple, compound, and complex) * “I’m pretty exhausted after a long day from work. But when I get home, I see my dog Max waiting, and I realize that he needs to go for a walk.” * “Dogs can sense many things, but apparently not energy levels. Max is just as excited to go out when I come home stressed out and tired as he is when I come home excited and happy.”
5. Three sentence rewrites (any combo of simple, compound, and complex) * “I work a long day, usually getting home at 5 or 6 at night. I’m always about ready to eat dinner

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