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Grade 12 English Portfolio Work

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Daniel Abrams

Grade 12 English Portfolio Work:

PERSONAL ESSAY:
“… In a tone which brilliantly managed to combine sarcasm and world-weariness.”

First Draft

7 October 2016

Word Count = 1000

In one sudden movement, I found myself lying down. From what had once been a still and contemplative stare forward, I suddenly had no recollection of how I landed with my eyes observing upwards with my head at a ninety-degree angle from the ground. I became aware of how finely cut the edges of the Drakensburg wild grass were, as they sliced through the thick hair on my head and legs, pushing eagerly towards my scalp and skin, pulling me further into the ground, returning me. I became aware of how unstable the ground was as it bubbled and flowed past the bends and protrusions of my spine, preparing to split beneath me and return me. I became aware of how silent the air was as I listened for a voice of consolation but was met with the wallowing of daggered winds. I noticed the sky above me. Too soon yet too late, I was holstered from my daze and told to return.

Eyes widened. Pupils dilated. Shivering. Wincing. I tried to squirm. I tried to scream. As I gazed at the ephemeral blackness, extending past the reaches of my peripheral vision, I found the three burning balls on Orion’s Belt. There they were. They must have been real. For a few metres to the right a perfectly spaced constellation in the shape of a repulsively large woman beamed. She looked right at me, with

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