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Hook Sentence: Lord Of The Flies

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Hook Sentence (a broad, but engaging sentence about the chosen topic) If the power of leader will fall into the wrong hands then people can become savages. If people are savages there will be no order. If there will be no order or any order then people will die. That is what happened to schoolboys on an island without any adults. __________________________________________________________________________________________ b. Introduce Supporting Evidence #1 Ralph gets voted to be chief of the island c. Introduce Supporting Evidence #2 The conch has the power of summoning a meeting d. Introduce Supporting Evidence #3 The conch gets destroyed and the power of peace is gone e. Introduce Supporting Evidence #4 (optional) f. Thesis Statement …show more content…

(CM) Elaborate on your quote The boys know that the conch is very valuable to them. They will need it to call a meeting to make the right decisions all together to survive and get rescued. f. (TR) Transition to the next paragraph There is always a competition to get the power higher power of control of people just like jack took over Ralph's chief. Paragraphs III. Supporting Evidence #2 a. (TS) The conch is order on the island without the conch there will be no order. b. (CD) After everyone were gathered they all had to vote for a chief Ralph or Jack. Every one said. c. (CD) “Let him be chief with the trumpet-thing.”(Page 29) d.. (CM) Ralph has the conch so he gets voted to be chief. e. (CM) After Ralph gets voted as the chief of the island Ralph says that the most important thing to do is to have everyone doing something. Ralph said that if you want to talk during a meeting you must be holding the conch. f. (TR) later in the novel Ralph loses the power of chief after the conch is destroyed. Paragraphs IV. Supporting Evidence #3 a. (TS) The conch gets destroyed and the power of peace and order is gone. b. (CD) When the rock killed piggy and the conch was destroyed next to it jack

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