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Huffing And Puffing, I Made My Way Through The Crowded

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Huffing and puffing, I made my way through the crowded halls. Dashing through the students like a driver avoiding the orange cones. There was no way I could be tardy to 7th period English class. My English classroom was room 207 which was on the other side of the Earth. During lunch I played basketball with my friends and we hooped until the bell rang, causing me to be late all the time. Not only was I running so I would not be late, but to dry off the sweat as I ran. Just as I could see the door, and was merely 5 feet away. The bell goes off. “Beeeep!” Before even stepping a foot through the door, an echoed voice in the class said. “Name on the board, David”. Everyone who came tardy had to stay in after school for ten minutes. I …show more content…

There wasn’t a day that the girls in the class didn’t ask her about their outfit, always admiring what she wore. I do admit there was something that made kids gravity to Mrs. Bradley, it was the sound that came out of her mouth. Every word, sentence, story, she spoke was a song full with melody.
As the long figure shadow appears beside me, my essay floated down from her hand. Immediately I saw my paper covered in red lines. I turned the pages to the last one where Mrs. Bradley left the grade. For some reason, the shock of receiving another C- got to me. This essay wasn’t like the rest, the ideas and arguments made in the essay were strong. How could this essay not get at least a B. Next to the grade she left a comment, “Please see me about your paper.” Other days I would have ignored it and just left after class but today my name was on the board. There was no escaping Mrs. Bradley.
The rest of the class period was a complete blur. The only thing on my mind was what she wanted to talk about. This wasn’t the first essay assigned and all of the previous essays I had received the same score. Could it be that she thought I plagiarized something? What could she possibly want to talk about?
The bell finally rang. All of the students rose and headed out the door. Similar to a farmer ringing a bell and the cattle coming in to eat. I was the only

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