Lena’s intentions in the first letter was to get to know her pen pal a little bit more. So, she started asking a couple questions. She answered one of the questions I sent her, so I can tell that she read carefully the letter I sent her. I imagine getting to know her pen pal better. There was not that much experimenting in this first letter other than the questions she is asking me. The letter is well written. Moving aside some of the errors its well organized. The words that are used in the paper seem to be words that Lena is comfortable with using, so it’s not that hard for her to write this letter. It could get easier to write each letter as the semester goes if she is learning more in her
Abigail Adams thinks the place is ok. The text states, "The house is upon a grand and superb scale, requiring about thirty servants to attend and keep the apartments in proper order." This proves that the people working have to keep the place in order, but it takes alot of people. The text states, "The lighting of the apartments, from the kitchen to the parlors and chambers, is a tax indeed." This proves that the lighting could be expensive looking and may cost alot to keep the lights on. The text states, "Fortunately, a straggling man came up with us, and we engaged him as a guide to extricate us out of our difficulty; but woods are all you can see from Baltimore until you reach the city." This
I have been procrastinating on sending you this letter. It’s not that I have been too busy or that life has gotten in the way. The truth is that I have found difficulty writing you an apology because I am disappointed in myself and embarrassed. However, this isn’t and shouldn’t be about me. The truth is that I owe you a sincere apology for my actions. I asked you for help completing an assignment and I completely took advantage of your kindness and willingness to help a fellow student. I knew that you would be more than willing to help as you have always been there to offer guidance both personally and academically. I know that you only offered your mind map as an example of how you did the assignment. I took that example and used
This letter is meant to be a way for you to get to know me on a deeper level. You are probably using this letter not only to get to know the lives of the students you are teaching, but also to learn about the writing behaviors of your students. So for this purpose I will try to keep my letter short and interesting in order to not mess up. Before we begin I have a quick disclaimer, I am very sarcastic in everyday life so that does show in my informal writing. I am usually professional for most major papers, but for this paper you will probably see my sarcasm. Now that we have gotten that out of the way let’s start this letter.
Despite being Joe’s wife, Lena selfishly recognizes the value of being with Spunk, and is thankful for Joe’s death.
Thank you for your response to Mrs. Nicholson's paper.I hope your letter will help Mrs. Nicholson Teach me well. You would probably know the best what I do and what I need help with.I think your letter was probably true since I live with you and you notice things about me.I appreciate your response to Mrs. Nicholson so I am able to do this assignment.I saw that you wrote I needed help on grammar and I agree so hopefully I will improve this year. Many of the suggestions you wrote should hopefully help me have an awesome school year. Thank you again for taking time to write a letter.
I am writing you this letter to express my feelings towards your actions and behaviors during your time in Ms. Gruell’s class 203. I want to inform you of the level of inspiration your story and the stories of your fellow classmates had on my life. The stories, yours in particular, have made me appreciate life and see it in a new brighter perspective. I appreciate the effort Ms. Gruell did to make kids use a pen instead of a gun. Mostly I have been impressed by the development and growth that happened as you progressed through the years of being in her class.
I do not think it’s the component of Lena’s’ personality led to downfall and it not her undoing and it is definitely not completely her fault. It was her unstable environment and the lack of love present in her life. Keep in mind that in the 20th century women were basically nobody back then. Women were treated as though they were not important. Women duties and only duties back then were to clean, cook have and take care of their husband and children. Women had no voice, there were to be seen and not heard. Lena was illustrated in the story as weak, passive, gentle and docile. I would consider her a strong person but she didn’t know any better. In those time women had no say in their lives. They were controlled by the head of the household
I feel honoured to get your letter and found the information you shared with me very important. I’m writing this letter to You because I have a couple things from the letter that really stuck with me and a couple questions for You. First of all, I find it very important that you see what I could be. Right now, I don’t really know what I want to do with my life and knowing that you see the potential I have, gives me hope for the future. I want to keep working toward what I could become. Also, I know that you give me challenges because you want me to improve and work through problems, but sometimes there's too many challenges. I get overwhelmed with all the obstacles I have to face and don’t always want there to be a hurdle
I appreciate the time you look reading the letter. It is important that you carefully think about my
I am your sister from language IV and I am here basically to give you a feedback on your writing task. For this matter , I'll be checking it in relation to the instructions given by your teacher and also I'll be adding some extra tips that you can use for your future writing tasks as well :) because we are here to help each other and it is what I exactly want to do . Let's start !!! :)
I am writing on behalf of Giulia Vastano. It has been my pleasure to get to know her this year as her English instructor at Father Ryan High School. She is enrolled in Advanced Composition and Film Studies and is excelling in both. Both classes are centered on writing and critical analysis, and Giulia is definitely a leader in class discussions and her grasp of critical concepts shows in her papers. She is not afraid to take chances with her writing and gets to the core of her topic quickly. I think her writing has improved because of her love of reading.
Through the story the narrative techniques change because of the differences of tone that are present in the story. The diction, syntax and narrative differ through the entirety of the story and makes the mothers feeling seem more in depth. The story is told from the point of view of the mother and her remembering her daughter and all the things she did to affects her life. All of her feeling are expressed through the specific use of her diction and syntax.
First, what pleases me about this writing piece was that it took me time to write it. I tried something new where I came together with my teacher,
I don’t recommend you read this entire letter at once because every decision you make could change what is going to happen next. By the time, you get to the end of this letter everything that is written may no longer be true. It is up to you whether you read it or not.
I am writting this letter because it's the perfect way to preserve something so important like your birthday, but more especifically, your first birthday with me, and also to feel a bit closer to you when I wish I could be hugging you right now, probably planning a surprise party with your friends, or doing some handmade weird gift that you would love because you tend to love the silly things I do, and I'm not even being cocky.