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My Dad's Sneeze

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Throughout my essay I used metaphors and comparisons to expand on certain ideas. When attempting to give the reader a better understanding of my dad’s sneeze I described the beginning as “a wind up to the main event” and continued to call it “a firework” exploding. The purpose of these comparisons was to allow the reader a better understanding of the power behind something as simple as a sneeze. Also, by using these comparisons I was able to vary my word choice, thus making my essay more appealing to the reader.
Imagery was used in my essay to evoke thought and emotion from the reader. To better describe my dad’s sneeze I stated that it “seconds a herd of elephants tumbling through the African desert”. Most readers can picture in their

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