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My Writing Skills By Unlocking My Intellectual Mind

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When I first enter this classroom, ENG 3305, I consider myself a simple communications writer. I would simply read or study a situation, then write about it by stating the facts, narrating an event or idea, or simply give instructions on a task to do. I took this course with the notion of improving my writing skills by unlocking my intellectual mind and become more critical and analytical of the information I was to write about. My expectations for my writing skills was to become more assertive when explaining things in writing. I do not possess a large or extensive vocabulary as I would like to as a writer, however, I could compensate by becoming more creative with my writing style, and that is what my goal was when I decided to take …show more content…

Again, I missed to identify the things that didn’t made sense in the essay. For example, when the narrator is talking about the shoes she bought. She didn’t need them, but she bought them anyways, it proved that she was not someone to feel bad for. She was not hurting for money, yet she gave the impression that she did. In the party where she was catering, she broke the crystal not because she was careless, moreover, she was upset because of the guests in a table talking; in her mind, she believed she was smarter and better than them. The other point I fail to notice, was when she talked about her mom, the mom was someone who was very critical about black actors. She believed black actors gave a bad impression of blacks because they were giving condescending role, hence she said blacks don’t belong in movies. However, she was a light skin woman pretending to be a French maid, because her employer wanted that from her. She was lying about everything, she believed. The essay reflects the problems with dreams. They were in Hollywood because they liked the movies, the movies made them dream and by living there, they were closer to their dreams, but when dreams chattered we have nothing, dreams are the problem and the narrator finally sees that in the end, hence I missed this point when I wrote my response. In the third essay, “Under the Influence”, I did identify the dad’s drinking problems. I was able to pin some of the main points, like

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