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Personal Narrative: 420 East South Street

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420 East South Street was gloomy, and the first few drops of rain had bursted on the darkened gravel, on a chilling day in late October. It was clear that a prolific storm was on its way, heard in the distance echoing through the dazed night. Just a few moments before, I had received a message from my friend Brittany to go to the address of 420 East South Street, as quickly as possible. My other friend Claire had also asked me to arrive there by 8pm, and it was already half past seven. As I made my way, I could feel the transient rain bracing softly against the touch of my skin. I could also hear the imminent thunder striking overhead, as the clouds flared on the horizon, making me feel even more lethargic. At the same time, I had been completely …show more content…

The house was pictured as tall and thin, created from abundant greystones, overwhelming my senses. With just my luck, my phobia of fury furious bats surrounding the gates had ferociously flew past me. As I had pushed the heavy gates open, the touch of the bare iron bars, as cold as ice, had covered my hands completely. As I had stepped foot into the house, I could shortly smell a trite scent coming from the rotting wood, along with estranged aromas coming from the small vents through the basement walls. I could also hear the shutters rattling mysteriously from a distance, the floorboards creaking in tune to my footsteps, leading me to the corridor that had been covered in cobwebs. In addition to this, I could hear the indeterminate voices off into the distance, clearly audible. Just then I had saw someone rushing inside one of the doors. The door had creaked ominously on its rusty hinges, as it slowly opened, driving my inner claustrophobia insane. It might have even been the same person who I had heard the footsteps of earlier. In that moment I had thought to myself, “Who else could be inside? Was it Brittany, maybe Claire? I had shivered with frightfulness for a few moments, until I had then decided to follow the person. Slowly, I had entered the room directly behind me. The bedroom curtains had been shivering with the cold breeze that had been entering the room. Just when I thought I had it right, the dim light of the moon had flickered, and the mysterious person had darted away. Thinking more of it, it could have just been my imagination. The room I had entered was an impetuous mess, like someone had decided to tear it apart in an act of violence. Through the cold iron bars, I could see the sky gently clearing up. I could finally see the moon, a distant lantern in the night sky. I looked at my watch, already ten minutes to eight. As I continued to go from

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