preview

Personal Narrative

Decent Essays

“He’s my brother they can't just take him away and tell me I can't talk to him!”....Hold on I better start from the beginning. We are off! On probably the saddest “vacation” i've ever been on. I'm about to tell you the story in as much detail as I can about the day I had to say goodbye to my lifelong best friend. This is the day my brother left for the air force. The day is July 6th and we are driving up to Kansas City.

I have been dreading this day for a long time, but it's here now and I have to get in the car. Sitting in the car with my dad driving, my mom sitting in the passenger's seat and my brother and I are in the back seat...no one is talking. We go and pick up Connie, after about 10 minutes everyone is talking. I couldn't tell …show more content…

Today is the day. We have breakfast and then go and see my brother. He is about to be sworn in. I can't describe it, but it feels like every memory I've ever had with my brother is rushing into my brain and being torn apart. The big men keep making it worse, they keep saying he is no longer ours and they belong to the military now. Not the nice comforting words I really needed. “He’s my brother they are not allowed to take him away and tell me I won't be able to talk to him” I kept thinking this, this thought would not leave my mind. I think I was more angry than sad, angry that I wasn't the older child, that it wasn't me leaving him, that he wasn't going to be mine anymore. Its coming to the end. We are standing in a square room with a bunch of other men and women just like my brother and other families just like me. All of us in one room watching our loved ones being sworn into the military, It's over there's no turning back now. Finally, we are in a room where we are waiting for my brother's bus to get here to take him to the airport, I wish we could wait there forever and the bus would never come. The bus came, I didn't cry, I couldn't cry. The angry feeling came back, why is the bus here and why don't I want to cry. I still didn't believe my brother was leaving, none of this felt real. Hugs all around, I didn't want to let go...can you hold onto a moment forever? I quickly found out you can not. Just as fast and that moment lasted, he was on the bus and …show more content…

The trip I never wanted to happen then never wanted to end is over. I shut my eyes and in that moment all I could do was cry, but that didn't change anything, I believed it helped though. Heading back home with one less person than we came with, the car felt bigger now, but our family felt smaller. No one was really talking, no one had anything to say. By this point Connie and I are both on our phones watching Netflix and my mom is reading, I couldn't tell you what they were thinking but I was just trying to distract myself. All of a sudden we slow down and pull into a gas station parking lot, we have a flat tire...great. Waiting and waiting. Having to take all of our stuff out of the back so we can get a spare tire and then having to wait around some more. It's on! We are on the road again! We are driving home slower now because we are driving on a bubble, but all I want is to go home now. After we drop off Connie we are that much closer to being home….I want to change now that the front of my shirt is now gross from crying so much. We pull into the neighborhood. I see our house. We are home! It's the end of what is still to this day the worst trip i've ever been

Get Access