Personal Narrative Fiction

The ache in my chest was building, and I felt all of the darkness inside of me build. The pressure was only intensifying and I knew that I had to do something, and quick.

“Ahhhhh” I screamed as the zipline took flight. Letting go of the handle I then relaxed. The anxiety had gone away and I was enjoying the moment.

I could feel it in my fingertips, the ends of my hair, and everywhere in between. It stretched inside of me like a coiling snake, ready to lash out.

A little bit of walking the butterfly disappeared in thin air and I was in control or my body now. In relief, and just started to walk back to Todoroki-

Adrenaline pulsed through my veins like a race car; my knees started to buckle beneath me. My palms and face were sweat soaked with anticipation. My friend encouragingly nudged me forward. Fear trickled down my spine, sending me off the cliff of sanity.

The freezing snow and the black sky made my mind race. I was thinking out of my head. “I’m going to get hypothermia,” I said.

head was clouded with thousands of thoughts like, what if the ride got stuck or will I get sick? Before I

Abruptly, I cramped uncontrollably forward like having my appendix burst. Without warning my legs collapsed. I dropped knees first to the floor. I groaned as my chest slammed into the terrain.

My vision was getting increasingly blurry and the pains in my chest were growing sharper. I could not see much but as I looked at her, she held up three items.

On his way home from Baseball, Julian was thinking to himself about what he could do outdoors. Then he gets a perfect idea, "Lets go on a hiking trip and I'll invite some guys too!" Julian then calls some guys from his baseball team, Justin who is very layback and funny. He calls Ricky who is the captain of the baseball team and Jesus (who is called chuy)and he is more of the gentlemen type but if you get him mad, he could probably take out a trailer full of bad guys. Julian decides he'll call them tomorrow, the next day Julian calls Ricky first.

I could feel the blood pounding in my chest. Blackness crept into the fringes of my vision. My voice was hoarse from screaming; I didn’t remember screaming though.

Hands were wrapped around my neck. I couldn 't breathe. I felt something touch my hand and I let out a sob. I tried to calm myself down. This isn’t going to happen again. I

"What does this friend of yours look like?" asked Judy, taking notes the entire time

Moreover, the cold air was weaving through my wide open mouth traveling down my throat, through my nerves causing my whole body to quiver. Looking out in front, a sea of arms held straight up to the sky swaying uncontrollably. The rigid metal seat pushed up against my back as I try to move forward, but abruptly the wind swiftly thrusts me back banging my head on the seat as my mind vibrates in circles. Clenching my hands as we slowly

When it was finally our turn the suspense had already filled me, and it made me think I would get hurt on the ride. I pleaded my brother