I wrote 52,708 words on my homework assignment.
Eighth grade isn’t the best time to tell oneself to write a novel. It was an English assignment we had to do over the course of November, and the bare minimum was to write 10,000 words--so merely a novel. I initially scoffed at the thought of even attempting to write beyond the minimum. I didn’t think any teacher would bother to read each of his or her’s 120 students’ 10,000 words or more novels, so I didn’t see the point of writing anything up to par.
Boy, I was wrong.
Although I only vaguely remember myself being very frustrated and overwhelmed over something on that day, I clearly imagined scenes in my mind about a girl living in a utopian society with dystopian views. Little did I know
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Once I finished my last chapter, I didn’t care if my teacher would bother to read this; I didn’t care about how bad my writing was; I didn’t care if anyone read my bad writing. All I needed to do was to get years of my bottled up emotions onto something.
Looking back at my writing three years later, I could not help but cringe at the numerous grammatical mistakes and poorly constructed chapters. It took countless nights staying up hours past my bedtime to construct the novel and be decently proud of it. In hindsight, I thought the nights staying up were worth it, albeit tiring. My attempts of using SAT vocabulary words and trying to incorporate them at the beginning of the novel looked incredibly stupid, and anyone can see my true writing style towards the fifth page and beyond.
Like most people, I dislike looking at any of my work in the past--especially those that I gave in the most effort but end up doing terribly, anyway. However, the feeling of cringe will forever be inescapable as long as I get older. No matter how old I am, I will look back at my past with not only nostalgia, but with animosity. My attempts to read my novel again several years later only left me grimacing on the second sentence. However, the cringe didn’t stop there; I still clench my glutes when I read essays that were due two days
A blank page. All writing begins with a white sheet of unnamed possibilities. And yet with skills, knowledge, and ideas, a blank page can morph into something magical. Shakespeare did not simply stumble upon Romeo and Juliet. Instead, he had to use his heart, mind, and pen to produce his masterpieces. Throughout freshman English class, we have been developing the skills to fill that daunting blank page with meaningful words. Moreover, students have been exposed to esteemed authors and asked to synthesize their thoughts in individual writing assignments. Consequently, I have learned a variety of important and life-changing skills that have sculpted my English knowledge throughout my time as an English 9/10 student.
“Is this your best work?” he started. “The topics don’t flow; you need to utilize transitions, for starters. Is this a teen directed novel? If so, increase the vocabulary level. This is something I would have read in third grade!” and on the criticism went. In the back of her mind, Violet thought that it must be constructive criticism, but the overwhelming thought was failure. With every sentence, every comment on the document, every highlighted phrase, Violet sunk a little lower in her chair. When he was finished, Violet mumbled a thank you and sped out the
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She hadn’t imagined the charachters so vividly. She hadn’t realized just what she had written or how much she had overestimated the challenge of finishing it. All she had to do was exctly what she had already done - in just a few weeks - again. She had thought she was too young or too inexperienced to write somthing amazing or intricate or meaningful, but as she read over her novel she realized that she already had.
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