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Personal Narrative: My Utopia

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Utopia ‘ahhh’ … I was told it was the land of the free, the place where anything was possible no matter where you were from or who you were. I had once stupidly thought that it would’ve been possible for a man like me, a man with skin darker than most and a family without a spare penny, to do the impossible. To achieve a better life. To save my family from poverty. A man once told me that I cannot succeed in life until I want to succeed as much as I want to breathe. I was stupid to come … … and a foamy lather spills over the edges. Back and forth, back and forth. The dull swishing of the mop across the floor had become a daily routine. The day I began working at this nuclear power plant I was filled with optimism. I believed it would be a fresh new start with none of the same judgements and stereotypes to hold me back …show more content…

I found a book in which you were able to pick what the protagonist would do and i remembered how i had found these books interesting at a young age. So in the end after looking at many different conventional styles of writing i decided to go with ‘pick your own story’. To start off my draft i looked at how other authors who also used the style, ‘pick your own story’ and successfully created books with it. I found a story about a robot and how he just wants to fit into society but he is mocked and bullied because he is a robot by other people. Through a few drafts i came up with the storyline about a black man who is poor and just wants to be accepted in society and help his family. Through more drafts i was able to create this final product of my story. I am happy with the end product of my story as i quite enjoy the story myself and feel like i gave the short story a hundred percent. I believe i can further improve my stories by writing more drafts and plans and having my final product proof read by other people rather than just

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