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Public School Admission Essay

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In my short seventeen years, public school has been the greatest, most valuable influence in my life. Since entering Pre-Kindergarten at age four, I’ve been introduced to a wide and diverse range of people, opinions, and opportunities. I attended an inner-city elementary school, where my classmates came from a variety of financial, ethnic, and cultural backgrounds. Learning alongside children different from myself forced me to develop strong teamwork and collaboration skills early on, which became vital to my success in secondary school. I learned to accept others for who they were, and to open my mind to new ideas. Public school also deserves partial responsibility for my passion for the arts. I’ve taken a visual arts course every year since …show more content…

Being a team captain for my high school’s varsity volleyball team helped to develop my leadership skills, both on and off the court, and conditioned me to the weight of responsibility. Academically, I rank in the top of my class, and continually strive to put forward my best effort. Although I intend to enroll at the University of Florida, I won’t be able to without the support of financial scholarships. I live in a household of five, and although my father operates his own small business on the side, he was laid off from his regular job last year. In the past thirteen years, he has experienced six layoffs, requiring our family to look to my mother’s teacher’s salary for a reliable income. I’ve known for several years that paying for college would be my responsibility, so I aimed to excel in school in order to qualify for merit-based aid. To earn money for college, I currently work part-time after school and on weekends at Chick-fil-A. The Coite and Mildred Hill Scholarship would contribute to the cost of my freshman year at UF, providing me time to raise funds for the following

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