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Rhetorical Analysis

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In response to Geoffrey Shepherd's article “It’s clear the US should not have bombed Hiroshima and Nagasaki”. Shepard tries to pull us into his claim by using pathos, logos, and ethos. He uses estimates of 500,000 Japanese soldiers died from the atomic bomb. Then Geoffrey begins to state that we had an alternative spot to drop the bombs, the alternate spot we could’ve dropped the bomb would have been Tokyo Bay. It was idle and estimated that less lives would’ve been taken and would showed more of a threat to the Japanese leaders. Geoffrey Shepard uses pathos in a good way. In this story that’s his strongest form of persuasion, he makes a strong claim by stating that if we bombed Tokyo Bay it would’ve taken less lives and made more of threat. To the others who read this like Americans, Japanese and other races that were impacted by this may agree. Then also it makes you think did we really have to bomb the innocent people of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. Did the US really need to drop the A bomb twice and not just once? That’s how Shepard persuades us he gets to our feelings. …show more content…

The reason is because Shepard attempts to persuade readers with numbers which isn’t bad but it can be when your numbers are estimates. Writers should be right when trying to catch an audience and not use estimates because they can be wrong. What if the US bomb Tokyo Bay and didn’t scare anyone, now that problem would be worse and it would’ve taken longer. In World War Two the Japanese were known for not quitting till the end as soon as they see two bombs drop on a little spot they can use that rage and could’ve found a way to

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