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Rhetorical Devices Used By Gary Soto

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Everybody’s felt it. That tingling sensation making all the hairs stand on the back of your neck. The sweat slowly rolling down the spine. The consciousness that everyone is staring at you, and knows the horrible deed you’ve committed. The guilty conscience of a six-year-old is a terrifying experience, and Gary Soto portrays it perfectly in his short autobiography reminiscing on when he plundered an apple pie many years ago. As we follow young Soto through the pressures of being a young criminal, he enhances the readers understanding of what it was like by using many different rhetorical devices and strategies. Soto uses a combination of imagery, symbols, and intriguing diction that allows the reader to peer into the life of his younger self. …show more content…

He sees it as a percentage that the body is made up of. Saying that he “was holy in every bone” like it was something as simple as that. This, along with calling the birds in his backyard “flopping angels” immediately displays his childish behavior to the readers, and by using the descriptive diction, it intensifies the effect it has. The same behavior is exhibited when he starts off the next paragraph with “boredom made me sin”. Soto, along with millions of other kids whenever they do something bad come up with an excuse for why they engaged in this mischievous behavior. It automatically takes the blame off of them, and places it somewhere else to try and get out of punishment. Next, we are introduced to Soto’s unusual and interesting choice of diction. When presenting the opportunity to steal a pie, he feels his “sweet tooth gleaming and the juice of guilt wetting [his] underarms”. Instead of saying that his armpits were sweating, he uses this choice of words instead, which allows the reader to really get an insight to what he was feeling in his moment of weakness. This “wet” diction, …show more content…

After denying a piece of the pie to Cross-Eyed Johnny, Soto begins to remember the things such as the grocers forehead, and a car that honked at him. Next, its Johnny who begins to build the guilt onto Soto, stating that “[Soto’s] hands are dirty”. Apart from him being a young child who does not have the best hygiene, Soto could have thought that Jimmy knew about stealing it, since that is also a common saying about someone who has committed a crime. After saying this, Jimmy climbs to the top of his house and watches him closely, almost as if he is god watching Soto from above. He continues to include all of these religious symbols and images because while the reader is able to pick up on them as they happen, Soto’s younger self wont realize them until he becomes paranoid at the end when he thinks everyone

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