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Rhetorical Precis Essay

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Rhetorical Precis In her research term paper, “Juveniles; Lost, Misguided Individuals” (2016), Sandy Hirsch, a senior at Granite Hills High School, suggests that teens shouldn’t be held responsible for their actions. This argument is developed through the use of studies and cases, personal opinions and various factors for both pro views and con views.The purpose of this work is to persuade the audience that teens should not be held accountable for their actions. My intended audience is that of the Granite Hills High English faculty. Introduction This paper will depict a subjective view of that teenagres should not be helf accountable for their crimes and infractions but instead should be placed in the proper facilities, …show more content…

One of the main, big key factors is bullying. Bullying has been known to cause teenagers and young children to go down the wrong pathways, leading to aggression, mental health related problems, ie. Anxiety and Depression. This can carry on into their late 20’s (Bruce Bover), social withdrawal and other changes in habits. Teens who are bullied who end up becoming faced with aggression is due to the gradual build in sensitivity over time. The heavy burden that is weighted on teens who are bullied, commonly end up facing mental health problems which lead to stress, Anxiety and Depression. Depression showing links to aggression as it can cause irritability and sensitivity to violence (Bullying worse for…) in some teens. This can lead to breakouts in fights. Teens who have also been faced with bullying tend to fall into a social withdrawal. Social withdrawals are apart of Anxiety which again, can be caused by bullying. Social withdrawal includes pulling back from partaking in socializing and engaging in any kind of enjoyable activity, this is caused by an upheave or loss of the genetic expression of the dopamine pathway (Choi, Charles Q). When corrupted/tampered, the persona is no longer able to feel any joyus feeling or any form of emotion associated with joy, pleasure and happiness. This can lead to substance abuse, because teens cannot find pleasure in what was once considered joyus

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