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Roadmap Juvenile Justice

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Throughout the revision process, I had the opportunity to discover my voice as a writer and engage in the conversation that is academic writing. In my final paper, I tried to reinforce the idea of a roadmap to guide my reader along my thought process. During my Embedded Writing Consultant appointment, I walked through the guidelines of a roadmap with Amarachi, and she emphasized the importance of a roadmap in reorganizing my paper. I realized that I could clearly articulate what I wanted to state by explaining it to her out loud, but when I translated such ideas to my paper, the main point oftentimes became lost. You mentioned something similar in your feedback, as many of the points I made did not connect to my central claim. Recognizing that I needed to emphasize my plan and then carry it out, I rewrote my paper with this in mind. …show more content…

The article we read in which the topic sentences connected to form one coherent idea inspired me to apply this to my own writing. I rephrased my topic sentences in an attempt to make them all relate to one another and the greater central claim. Thus, the basic structure of my paper involves defining the three spheres of evidence in the juvenile justice system (neuroscientific, social, and historical) in the introduction, and then opening each separate paragraph by stating the specific reason of interest. The conclusion ties these ideas together once again. Lastly, when you read my paper, you remarked that it seemed more like a “book report” than a discussion between authors. In my final paper, I tried to facilitate a conversation between my sources by adding my own analysis and expanding upon each

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