The concept of this comedy-romance script is smart. It’s a high-concept premise that easily engages the audience. The first thirty pages offer a likeable protagonist in the character of Sue Ellen. Her goal is clear and the stakes feel personal. The audience easily engages to the plotline and one effortlessly roots for Sue Ellen. It’s the type of concept that feels marketable.
The tone is consistently light-hearted. Good visual and physical comedy is used, as well as some fun dialogue. There are solid themes about grieving, healing, learning to survive on one’s own, and respect.
The opening of the script does a nice job establishing the ordinary world of Sue Ellen as a hard working mother. The idea of career day is a nice reveal that conveys
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It’s a bit creepy. Make sure there’s a payoff later.
It does feel or seem a bit awkward that Sue Ellen would want to have another child given her children are grown. Make sure to explore Sue Ellen’s inner conflict i.e. that she feels defined as a mother (nicely foreshadowed with “I’m a mom!”)
Show that she struggles with her own kids growing up and possibly moving out. Having another baby probably feels that void, or subconsciously she knows that she’s losing her husband and thinks this is the way to fix it. This doesn’t need to come out in the first act, but later during her character arc it should.
Also, perhaps connect the idea of Restin Cosmetics to her inner struggle to be young again or to her self-image.
The scene in which Bill breaks up with Sue Ellen might be reworked. Consider another way for Sue Ellen to find out about Diane. For example, maybe she decides to surprise Bill at his office. She can still be wrapped in saran wrap. Maybe she walks in on them. It much better to show the affair than to have Bill verbally tell her. Given that a visual of Diane is setup with the video, it makes for a nice payoff to catch Bill with Diane, especially if Sue Ellen is in the saran-wrap. This can generate nice
This film used comedy to help scent the different characteristics of each sub-genre. There was classic rom-com comedy of the boy trying to get the girl and failing. The juvenile comedy often seen in some buddy comedies was well. And throughout the movie we saw a satirical take on religion as well as the juxtaposition between reality and the musical numbers in the film.
This article “One and Done” is an excerpt from her book “One and Only” and the reviews of this book come from extremely credible sources such as the New York Times, therefore establishing her credibility. The author’s purpose for writing this piece is to argue that having one child is not “detrimental” to the child psychologically, and only-children are not different than kids with siblings. This piece was written July 7, 2010 so the research and studies are very up to date. The main points of this article started out with the argument of why Sandler herself decided to have one child, and this is based on how “the economy is sluggish… and raising kids cost a bundle. She describes the effects of the recession on the number of children women bear, and points out that women are having less and less children because of their high costs. Sandler then goes on to discuss why people urge families to have more than one child, and she uses personal experience of a cashier in a store to exemplify the pressure of having more kids. Sandler investigates why there is such an aversion to have only one child, “single children are perceived as spoiled, selfish, solitary misfits,” because this is such a believable stereotype, parents are pressured to have multiple children because they “don’t want to do that to their child.” Sandler uses the study by Granville Stanley Hall to act as a counterargument
Ellen Montgomery is a young girl who lives a happy life with her devoutly Christian parents. She discovers that her mother is ill and must go to Europe with Ellen’s father. Ellen then travels with strangers to live with a distant aunt. The strangers are cruel to Ellen, and she tries to escape. An old man sees Ellen crying and teaches her about God. Ellen decides to be more devout, like her mother. She reaches Thirwall, where a man called Mr. Van Brunt takes her to the home of her aunt, Fortune Emerson. Fortune treats Ellen badly and will not let her go to school. Ellen finds solace in Mr. Van Brunt and other neighbors. One day, Ellen discovers that her aunt withheld a letter from her mother, and she runs away crying. She meets Alice Humphreys,
One thing I personal liked about the film was how the theme binds all these characters together is pain. They’re all damaged in some way and are forced to reach out and help each other when they’ve reached rock bottom. Those moments are the most beautiful to watch because there’s no judgment, just community. I enjoyed that about the movie the most because still today you have a lot of situation where are more likely to judge you then to help. Which I feel is very sad because in today society people will talk about you and laugh instead of seeing what the problem is or possible helping you to correct the problem.
The script conveys solid messages and themes about second chance, never giving up, and believing in one’s self.
Parker became a mother, she had to decide if she wanted to follow her parent’s footsteps with the
Aging can be more than wrinkles, fine lines and grey hairs. In this photo, this woman appears to not feel confident with her age and her appearance. Makeup artists or doctors are on either side of her face, holding up cosmetics as if they were to fix up any of the “issues” that came with aging. “How can I be envious of where you are, when I've been there myself,” (Album 121) expressed Morrie to Mitch. Morrie explained to Mitch how he’d already been all of these ages and how deep down each of those parts of his life are still him in one way or another. He finds that people don't appreciate how the aging process is not only decaying. It is the act of growth in oneself, and people need to understand that than work up on the physical attributes
As Anne Frank once wisely stated, “How wonderful it is that nobody need wait a single moment before starting to improve the world” (citation???). She probably was not thinking of satire in entertainment when she wrote this, but I think it fits perfectly. Satire is a technique that aims to reform society, often times through humor (I used parts of definitions from pdf… how do I cite it). There are popular television shows that employ this technique in order to better the world. In Ellen Degeneres’ daytime talk show she satirizes politicians through a skit that pokes fun at people who are against issues such as: gay marriage and reaching across the aisle.
Victoria is in her teens and she face problems with how she looks and her Chinese heritage. She is interested in fashion and make up because she wants to fit in with the society: “Victoria had always liked to dress up”.
Tonight, on Lifetime’s original show, “Mothers Who Gave Birth,” we’ll follow Eleanor Rigby throughout her journey of pregnancy and childbirth. She is a single mother of two boys, Derrick, age six, and Lee, age four. Last fall she was surprised with the news of a third pregnancy, but was extra delighted when she learned it would be a girl, which she has named Marlena. During this episode we’ll focus on her pregnancy, her experiences during labor and delivery, and how she is recovering now at home. Join us as we dive into another mother’s personal journey on “Mothers Who Gave Birth.”
The script explores the pain of loss, healing, and reconnecting. The hero’s past emotional pain helps give the story and the character more depth.
Do you find girl drama entertaining? In the 2004 film, Mean Girls, that is exactly what one can expect. High school cliques like the popular crowd against all the other cliques is guaranteed to always bring drama. This film, directed by Mark Waters, includes all the crazy things that teenagers think they need to do to be popular including, drunken teen parties, pranking high school teachers, and stealing boyfriends to look popular.
Time to break out those foam fingers, platinum blond wigs, and schoolgirl uniforms and get ready to join Christina Aguilera in some celebrity impersonations! In a promotional commercial released for the season finale of NBC’s The Voice Aguilera impersonated several of her fellow female pop stars while imagining how their try-outs for a judging position on the show would proceed. Christina Aguilera tweeted out a link to the video with the caption “this was so fun! Fun tribute to those I love and admire,” signing the message XoXtina.
“This dark comedy with some criminal action thrown in brings a lot of difficult issues up to the surface. ...Four Stars". "This book is chuck-full of 'that’s so wrong' kind of humor, the kind you’ll want to read aloud to your spouse and get them to laugh with you." - Portland Book Review
She states, “After a while you forget / what you really look like. / You think your mouth is the size it was. / You pretend not to care” (Atwood, 771). Her skin has also aged and is paler; it no longer has “the golden slick / of fresh spread-margarine” (Atwood, 771). She talks about how the clothes she has worn are