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Susan Page Divided We Stand

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Are We As Humans Divided? : An Analysis of Divided We Stand Humans are known to make mistakes but do these mistakes define who we are? According to Susan Page in, "divided We Now Stand," these mistakes in our political lives we do. In Page's article she tackles the idea that it is the voters who are polarizing politics leading to division. This claim however touching, it is lacking the right evidence that supports his argument making it weak and ineffective. This is due to the heavy reliance on others work, inability to connect to the audience, and lack of her personal ideas and how to fix this problem. Throughout the article Page is supported only by different studies in which show the nature of voters, however Page relies greatly on these studies, so much that her own ideas get lost. Nevertheless, the effectiveness of the studies were not lost. Page did an incredible job of connecting the studies to her claim which improved her argument. But page still could consider either removing studies or elaborating more on them. Since some of these studies could use a bit more discussion to help the audience better understand the study and …show more content…

Connection to the audience is what page needs in order to improve her argument and allow the audience to trust and relate to page. Next, The reliance on others work is too much and for an effective argument they must be either cut out or be provided more elaboration towards them. Another reason for this ineffective article is the absence of Page's opinion and how she could believes or does not believe that there is a hope or a fix to the problem she has presented. If Page could improve on these areas she may be able to write a more effective

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