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THE ANNOUNCER is a character driven story with strong potential. The idea of a successful businessman giving up the security of his stable and financially secure and swanky life for an unpredictable and erratic career as a voice announcer is highly engaging.

The premise is a great set up for conflict, drama, humor, and character transformation. The script conveys strong themes about never giving up on one’s dream. The tone is dramatic, but with a wonderful blend of humor. There's also a strong, inspiring pitch to the story.

Steve’s goal to become a working announcer and the grand master at the circus is clear and the stakes are personal. He’s risking his family and his home. Moreover, Steve’s inner goal is to find his own voice.

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Make sure to highlight that his coughing and losing his voice is psychological. This really gets lost and it’s so important to his character growth. Most of all, it’s not really clear what emotionally chokes his voice.

The audience has to understand what prevents him psychologically from performing. It could be connected to his father. It could be as simple as recognizing that he’s achieving his father’s dream and feels as if he’s betraying him. Maybe he suffers from panic attacks/anxiety and he has to find a way to overcome it like focusing on an object until he learns to resolve it internally in the third act. Once he realizes what blocks his voice, then he can go on.

Steve is a terrific character. He's extremely likable and the audience roots for him. He has a strong range of emotion. His dialogue as an announcer is solid. It's his inner conflict that requires more clarity. At the end he undergoes a powerful character transformation. Betsy is very likable. She supports her husband. She nicely confronts Katherine about how she has lost her voice to Darren. It’s a well crafted subplot that supports the main

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