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The Fictitious Journal Analysis

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The Fictitious Journal Beat sheet • Opens up with three children running in a park/meadow. With the sun shining on them as if it were the angelic innocence of youth. Kind of glare like a flashback. • It proceeds with two boys are waiting on a girl outside her house. Luke is standing on the porch eagerly awaiting her arrival from the house. Twiddling his thumbs and swaying back and forth. • While Dean waits patiently in the front yard, with a small dog joyfully bouncing from side to side. The girl emerges from house running straight to the dog. • The three attend a couple’s party. Once at the door, Luke quickly grabs Sara’s hand excitingly. Approved by a girl at the door as a couple. Sara then locks arms with Dean and they enter …show more content…

He describes what he believed happened. Also describing Sara’s connection with him. • Luke and Dean are sitting in the bleachers, watching Sara dominate the soccer field during practice. Luke gazes longingly at Sara while continuing to write in his journal. Narrating his feeling for her. • Luke is shown in his room writing in his journal. Avoiding his mother’s call for dinner and continuing to write all through the night at his desk. • Luke’s desire to confess becomes undeniable, but do to his shy nature decides to write a love letter instead. While sitting on the bench in a high school hallway. • Checking the time Luke forgets to sign the letter. While nervously rushing to Sara’s classroom, he bumps into a random student dropping the letter down the staircase. • Exiting his class, Dean notices the letter on the ground. Seeing it’s addressed to Sara, he brings it to her. • Sara believing the letter is from Dean, decides to take their relationship to the next level by publicly announcing their debut as a couple. • Shocked at this new development, Luke returns home locking himself in his room and tossing the journal …show more content…

Luke mingles with the crowd but constantly keeps an eye on Dean and Sara. Dean begins to call for everyone’s attention. He presents Sara with a Gift. Luke recalls the design of this gift looks like it’s from his journal. Luke returns to his apartment begins to start pacing. While in the shower, is still thinking about what happened. Staring at the roofing in his bed thinking, before falling asleep. Luke wakes up to a phone ringing. A conversation between him and Sara. He arrives at the bakery. Luke and Sara start baking a cake together. Luke walks in her office, and sees a picture of Sara and Dean He asks about the picture while recalling the plans from his journal. Sara invites Luke to dinner. Luke driving to Dean and Sara's house. During the ride, Luke recalls a memory about the journal referring the house and street. He gets out the car. Rings the doorbell. Sara answers giving him a hug. Luke is invited inside. Sits on the sofa. Sara calls for her children to introduce themselves. They come down the staircase in chronological order. Luke stares as each one comes down. While saying their names, Luke has a flashback of each name he wrote down in the

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