Women in general aren’t drawn to Wikipedia. So men significantly outnumber women on this website. This means that men create most of Wikipedia’s content and Wikipedia has a gender bias. This Gender Bias effects which pages are worked on and improved. Women are perfectly capable of using Wikipedia but they don’t seem to want to. “The Wikipedia Wars” aims to shed light on this issue. It discusses this problem, past attempts to solve it, reasons why these attempts failed, and some new ideas to solve it. This article urgently stresses this problem throughout. How can Hedy Lamar be more valued for her looks than for inventing Wifi? Insane! The tone is questioning, and informative. The tone can mostly be summed up with this sentence “Why do they feel less welcome on Wikipedia?” I think sums up the tone because, the author is asking a question and implying that they (women) feel less welcome on Wikipedia. Tone is used effectively in this article and the tone used is the best fit for this article. This is because this article is trying educate people on a problem and inspire people to fix it. While this article is making an argument, that women don’t feel welcome on Wikipedia, it’s not trying to refute another argument. …show more content…
This makes the text serious in nature. I think too many metaphors and hyperbole would make it seem like too much of an overreaction or satire. Only in a few parts of the text is expressive language used such as “The Wikipedia machine relentlessly churns out information over which women struggle to have any influence” This clearly shows that Wikipedia is incredibly difficult for women and acts as the thesis for the article. Here, it is effective. It lets the reader know what point the article is trying to make and highlights how big of a challenge Wikipedia is by comparing it to a
Wikipedia is a collaborative resource, which aims to be a compendium of all human knowledge. In a serious examination of Wikipedia as a credible and valid source of information we need to place our argument within a definable framework. As I will show information has many uses, for the purposes of this paper I will examine the use of Wikipedia for scholarly research, the kind, which I will be utilizing throughout the rest of my MBA program. I will be evaluating Wikipedia based on the parameters set forth by Brenda Spatt. The credentials, Impartiality, style/tone, and currency of Wikipedia will all be examined in this paper (Spatt 2011).
When students are doing research on the internet, Wikipedia is usually one of the first site to appear. For students, the site is usually tempting to click, but they are quickly reminded by their teachers that Wikipedia should not be used as a site of knowledge. They label the site as inaccurate, unreliable, and uncreditable. In Boyd’s article she writes that teachers consistently tell students to stay clear of Wikipedia at all cost. Students should not have to see the site as tempting. They should be allowed to use it and embrace the site. Wikipedia has so much educational potential and should not be ignored by teachers. Boyd also writes that some analyses have shown that Wikipedia’s content is just as creditable as, if not more reliable than, more traditional resources.
Eventhough, the internet can be helpful with education, it can also be unreliable. However, “The Hive” by Marchall Poe, was the openness of Wikipedia. Wikipedia is an online encyclopedia that anyone can use it. This might work for some people specially that ones who attend school or college. This is very helpful for them because in Wikipedia you can search or find anything you would like. Since anyone can write, or delete or use information off of Wikipedia, it makes it less controversial because anyone can put their input into the website. If don’t agree with something, that’s alright because you can add your own opinion. Poe describes how authors of certain wiki pages write with a bias to support their facts. Facts become opinions when feelings and emotions of bias get involved. “Instead of relying on experts to
The extent and degree of information and detail written in this article about each represented author and their contributing works can ultimately be seen as one of the articles main strengths. However, although this article gives a vast amount of information on the women’s opinions and beliefs the article at times seems disassembled and erratic. The flow of the article is somewhat hard to follow, and without an increased measure of concentration, the ability of the reader to comprehend and decipher whom the author is speaking of can be lost. Also, with the extensive amounts of information and detail that each female author contributes to the argument, readers are bombarded with data to interpret and distinguish upon. With the author of the article not decisively choosing the strongest points of argument from each author, the information becomes overwhelming and possibly confusing at times.
The article “The Case for Fitting In” compares to my idea of conformity because I think that it means how you change your opinion due to social pressure. My idea of conformity relates to the article because it was talking about how when people were in a group and someone said the wrong answer they usually went with it. “Each subject saw 18 sets of lines, and the group answer was wrong for 12 of them” this proves that most of the time people went with the group rather than going with their personal opinion. I think that the article really compares with my definition of conformity because I think that it causes you to change your opinion and sometimes causes you to choose wrong answers. I also strongly think that the article agrees with me because
The Internet is arguably gender-neutral. Unlike in face to face communication, when given the freedom of neutrality, some are confrontational online, while others are more open, humorous and less judgmental.
c. The author uses literature as he cites other literary works, websites, and research findings from other authors in order to support his main points throughout the text. In addition, the text’s citation style is APA in-text citation as Waisanen uses research findings, words defined by other authors, and examples of video clips from the Onion News Network to compare, support, and define his thesis and central idea of his paper. This is shown throughout the text; for instance, an example of research findings is on page 510 where Waisanen states the researcher findings of Achter (2008) on “… understanding and comprehending new parodies such as The Onion yet there is still much work to reveal the parody that is portrayed and illustrated to news
The author admits to making gender-generalizations throughout his essay
The author explains to us that many women are subject to subservient functions (Lakoff 46). The roles the sexes play in society have a determination in how they are treated Robin states (Lakoff 46). She tells us about her first hand experiences of this, which cause the reader to sympathize for her (Lakoff 46). The author thinks that we will find two different ways of discrimination women face in language. The author explains the way that women are taught to use language and the way that general language treats them (Lakoff 46). This is where the reader starts to see the problems that women may face. The rhetorical strategy ethos used helps the reader feel for her cause as if it were happening to them first hand. This makes the reader aware of what is going on. At this point the audience can start to
Kinzel and Solnit both aimed their articles at the male population to point out an issue that is usually swept under the rug. A man being the intended audience strongly affects the argument because they are the ones that the authors have a problem with. They want to get their point across but need to do it in a way that does not anger the reader. Kinzel shows her great understanding of the issue by talking about how women are capable of this type of attitude. She even describes her behavior in situations like this “I’ve always called it “lecture mode,” and I even have this habit where I take a deep, semi-dramatic breath before it shifts on, and I begin, on the exhale, with, “Well--” I always begin with “Well--” and I always conclude with, “Does that make sense?” (Kinzel). By acknowledging this male readers are more receptive to her message and more likely to be open minded.
First thing to remember is that the purpose of the article, “Controversial Hillary Cover of Time Illuminates Sexism in the
The writer uses concrete and specific language in this essay to describe the form of communication between Lady Gaga and her monsters. The writer has a detailed understanding of who Lady Gaga is, who the monsters are and what they do. The authors tone is formal meaning they show a serious interest in their topic. When a formal tone is introduced to the readers, it means they want be thorough and the reader understands the meaning of the article. I do think the writers here do stereotype as they seem to be very biased towards Lady Gaga. They seem to be huge fans of her by listing so many of her accomplishments. They also stereotype when they discuss social media and certain communications of behavior. I personally think they should have done
Badke (2008) begins his article reminding us that Wikipedia although controversial is still the online encyclopedia of choice by 36% of the United States population according to Pew Internet & American Life Project’s findings. (As quoted by Badke, para. 1)
The Wikipedia is a free, online encyclopedia that lets every individual with Internet connection write and edits its articles. Jimmy Wales and Larry Sanger launched their creation in 2001 giving an opportunity to all willing people to work together to develop a common resource of knowledge. Many people have different believes and ideas about Wikipedia, therefore, some tend to think of it as a credible and valid source of information, others strongly disagree. “Since all the books and articles have been chosen for publication, each one has presumably undergone some form of selection and review” (Spatt, 2011, “p.”339-340). Unfortunately, this statement is simply not enough to
Malcolm Evans creates an image that displays one Western woman and one Middle East woman who voice similar views on one another although given their polar opposite backgrounds. In the case of Scott Russell Sanders and Nicholas D. Kristof, the two authors grew up within a similar Westernized culture, but have opposing views on how women should be perceived in today’s society. Through each’s use of rhetorical strategies, they convey their opinion of women.