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The Wikipedia Wars: Article Analysis

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Women in general aren’t drawn to Wikipedia. So men significantly outnumber women on this website. This means that men create most of Wikipedia’s content and Wikipedia has a gender bias. This Gender Bias effects which pages are worked on and improved. Women are perfectly capable of using Wikipedia but they don’t seem to want to. “The Wikipedia Wars” aims to shed light on this issue. It discusses this problem, past attempts to solve it, reasons why these attempts failed, and some new ideas to solve it. This article urgently stresses this problem throughout. How can Hedy Lamar be more valued for her looks than for inventing Wifi? Insane! The tone is questioning, and informative. The tone can mostly be summed up with this sentence “Why do they feel less welcome on Wikipedia?” I think sums up the tone because, the author is asking a question and implying that they (women) feel less welcome on Wikipedia. Tone is used effectively in this article and the tone used is the best fit for this article. This is because this article is trying educate people on a problem and inspire people to fix it. While this article is making an argument, that women don’t feel welcome on Wikipedia, it’s not trying to refute another argument. …show more content…

This makes the text serious in nature. I think too many metaphors and hyperbole would make it seem like too much of an overreaction or satire. Only in a few parts of the text is expressive language used such as “The Wikipedia machine relentlessly churns out information over which women struggle to have any influence” This clearly shows that Wikipedia is incredibly difficult for women and acts as the thesis for the article. Here, it is effective. It lets the reader know what point the article is trying to make and highlights how big of a challenge Wikipedia is by comparing it to a

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