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Thomas Hardy Syntax

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In war, each side sees the other as a faceless enemy that they feel no remorse for killing. War time propaganda and nationalism led each country to villain their opponents even though they are all equal. Every soldier is a regular citizen who is fighting the war only to protect their family. In the poem “The Man He Killed,” Thomas Hardy’s diction choice, syntax, and cyclical structure convey the idea that the people on both sides of the war are equal.
Thomas Hardy makes the enemy out to be human instead of an abstraction and uses repetition to make the enemy and himself equal. Hardy uses the phrase “he” in his writing to convey the idea that the enemy is a person instead of an abstract enemy without a face. In the first line of the poem, "Had …show more content…

In the first line of the stanza he hesitates in his reasoning for killing the man. Hardy writes, "I shot him dead because —/ Because he was my foe” (9-10). The use of a dash to separate the lines shows his hesitation. He does not know why he killed the man, so in line seven, he resorts to the explanation he has been trained to use. This is crucial to the theme of the poem as it shows that there is no correct reason to kill another man; the expectation is for soldiers to do so solely because their country considers the opposition a foe. In the second half of the stanza, he writes two lines alike to express the soldier’s need to reassure himself that the man he killed was truly a foe instead of someone similar to himself. Hardy’s choice of syntax in the line, “Because he was my foe /Just so: my foe of course he was” (10-11) indicates that the soldier has second thoughts as to if the man he killed was an enemy and needs to reassure himself that he is. This also ties in to the hesitation that the soldier felt previously in the stanza. The heavy syntax in this stanza shows the soldiers hesitation to believe that killing his opponent was the correct thing to …show more content…

Hardy uses “you” in this stanza to directly address the reader. This choice of diction makes the reader consider the words more carefully as it seems be written specifically for said reader. In the first two lines of the stanza, Hardy writes, “Yes; quaint and curious war is!/ You shoot a fellow down” (17-18). The use of you creates an image of themselves killing another man down instead of some nameless soldier. The use of the typically positive term “fellow” increases the guilt of the reader, making them see that they are killing an innocent man; not some villain that has evil intentions. This sentence in combination with the previous sentence makes the reader realize that it is strange to kill soldiers of other countries whom you know nothing about because they have been painted as your enemy by someone else. After realizing this, the final two lines of the poem come back to the idea of buying your supposed enemy a drink. Regardless of what he is supposed to think, he still would buy the enemy a drink. He is not an enemy, but a comrade. He and his enemy are equals. Hardy states, “You’d treat if met where any bar is,/ Or help to half-a-crown” (19-20). This shows that while he tries to reassure himself in stanza III that he should have killed his enemy, he still comes to the same conclusion that he did in the

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