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Vacation In Canada

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“Don’t call it a dream. Call it a plan.” When I hear this quote I think about vacation. This summer for vacation I would like to go to Canada.(HOOK)
Last Thursday my uncle Jeff overheard me and a friend talking on the phone. We were talking about how amazing it would be if we got to go to Canada for summer vacation. When we finished talking he came in the room and asked “What was that about.” “Oh we were just talking about how amazing it would be if we go to go on vacation this summer to Canada but, we don’t have enough money to go.” Then to my shocking surprise he said “I’ll pay for you and your mom to go to Canada for vacation.” I was overwhelmed with joy.(6 SENTENCES ELABORATING AND TELLING A STORY)
I would like to travel to Canada and while there, I would visit the cities of Quebec, Alberta, and Toronto.(THESIS STATEMENT) To begin with, I would visit the city of Quebec.The first place I would visit is the Battlefield Parks. They were originally built by the British to prevent the Americans from drawing close enough to lay siege to the walls of Quebec. Next I would visit Citadel also known as La Citadel. It is an active military installation. The Citadel is the oldest military building in Canada. The Quebec Conferences of 1943 and 1944, in which Governor General of Canada the Earl of Athlon, Prime Minister of Canada William Lyon Mackenzie King, British Prime Minister Winston Churchill, and US President Franklin D. Roosevelt discussed strategy for
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