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Valley Forge Dbq Essay

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I can feel the cold wind against my face. I feel frostbite engulfing my feet. To declare independence, we need to make sacrifices. The colonists made camp at Valley Forge, 18 miles outside of Philadelphia, for the winter. The housing is bad and there is no ventilation. People are dying and half of the men are ill. I will reenlist at Valley Forge. I will do this for these three reasons, there are only 10% of soldiers dying, I trust George Washington, and freedom is worth fighting for. My first reason is that there is only 10% men dying. In Document A, it says that there is only half of the soldiers sick and only 10% of them dying. This shows that there is a 10 % chance that you will die of illness and only a 50% chance that you get sick. If there is that small of a chance of dying, then you should risk it for your country. Being ill doesn’t guarantee death and I would rather die fighting than go home. If I die at Valley Forge, then I would at least be dying while serving my country. If I went home, I would always regret leaving. …show more content…

George Washington is trying to get more supplies and better conditions for the soldiers and he is making it better for us. (Document B).This gives me hope that better things are to come and things won’t always be this bad. I trust that he is trying to make things better and the Winter will be over soon. If I go through the bad times, then things will pay off in the future. You have to look at the bigger picture. Things are bad right now but things will get better in the future when we are independent. Also he is not just sitting back and watching us suffer, he is trying to make things better and help us through the

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