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Write A Personal Narrative Essay On Concussions

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It was half-way through the second quarter in the semifinals, and the Sun Valley Vikings were up by 14. They were on our own 10-yard line, and they were handing it off to one of their biggest and best players, Jack Krump, up the middle. I was in at safety, and I ran up to tackle him at the five-yard line but he came trucking through I just bounced right off of him like a wall. I heard the crowd cheering, so I could tell he scored a touchdown. They kicked the field goal and it was, good. We then ran into formation to receive the kickoff.
We lost the game, but I finished without a problem. Not until a few days later, I started getting symptoms of headaches. I couldn't think straight so my mom made me take the baseline concussion test, and my results came up positive for a concussion. She took me to the doctor to have them confirm that I had a concussion, and the results didn’t come back in my favor.
The next few weeks were not very fun. I couldn't run around, watch T.V., or play video games. I also had to make sure not to listen to too much music. I could only sit around and play board games, and who wants to do …show more content…

My parents made a wise decision to secure my future as opposed to letting me waste it on a middle school football game. So far it has been 3 weeks and we have only gotten thru 2 games and we have had two players that have needed a cast because of a broken arm, another player with a strained back, a player who pulled his shoulder, and another player who had a dislocated shoulder. That goes to show how dangerous the 8th grade season has started off. Even NFL players have started to retire because Football is getting increasingly dangerous. Many NFL players are getting severely injured and several of these injuries are critical concussions from helmet to helmet contact which lead to body weakening symptoms after the retirement like memory loss, depression, and

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