Eliminate choppiness from the following sentences. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses.She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer. Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.In the not too distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an academic adviser concerning the matter of a major.The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have been shown to be useful to them after graduation. Correct the nominalization in the following sentences.The failure of the staff to organize the festival properly was a disappointment to us.They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study. Eliminate sexist words from the following sentences.Though occasionally she may be called on to help others in the office, a secretary should take orders only from the manager she supports.The female lawyer conceded that her client was no Mother Teresa.

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Eliminate choppiness from the following sentences. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses.She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.  Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.In the not too distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an academic adviser concerning the matter of a major.The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have been shown to be useful to them after graduation.  Correct the nominalization in the following sentences.The failure of the staff to organize the festival properly was a disappointment to us.They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study.   Eliminate sexist words from the following sentences.Though occasionally she may be called on to help others in the office, a secretary should take orders only from the manager she supports.The female lawyer conceded that her client was no Mother Teresa.

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1. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring wander through wetlands, feeding mainly on grasses.…

Eliminate choppiness from the following sentences. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses. She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.