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13 Floors: A Narrative Fiction

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. 13 Floors
4:34 am, Saturday Morning
You know that feeling you get when your fingers have been submerged in water for too long and then you play in the snow for hours on end?

As I opened the door I noticed it wasn’t just me. Was I dreaming? Was this an hallucination? Was I lost? “Wait don't go in there!” said a voice. It was a little boy. Why was he here? “Am I breaking in?” “Hellooooooooo!! Is anybody there?” I yelled as I walked in. I laid there and my eyes darted back and forth. I wasn’t awake, I was just sleeping. Cold chills stretched across my body, and my eyes were so open yet closed. I was seeing everything. The sparkling scarlet blood dripped off of the table onto the white rug in the shape of feet everywhere. “You killed …show more content…

“You weren’t supposed to go in there!” There he was again. “What do you want from me?” “Nothing, now.” replied the young boy. There I was in drenched clothes. I was so lost. I was sleeping and now I'm awake. Nobody told me I wasn’t supposed to go in there. “Yes, I did.” I felt this gut wrenching feeling, as if my heart was getting yanked out, and I fell. 13 floors. Every floor was different. I met all of these people. They were so nice. “It took you long enough.” said the young girl. My hands were so rough and freezing. 13 floors was a long stomach dropping feeling. “You’re finally here.” Wait no, this wasn’t right. none of it. I was confused. Well, that’s my life story. Life seemed good down here though. Nothing mattered really. Wait, no, this wasn’t right. Just when I thought it was over, it was just getting started. Where was I? Where is my family? So many mind boggling questions ran through my mind. “You did it” and that was when I knew. The young boy was back and this time he didn’t leave. Freezing hands and numb fingers. I can literally see the purple veins running through my arms, and can feel the blood flowing through. I could see it too. It was like the color red that you only see in

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