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A Noiseless Patient Spider Poem

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Walt Whitman was a famous poet, who wrote many poems in a book called “Leaves of Grass.” However, once Whitman’s book was published, it failed because people disliked what he wrote, but Whitman didn’t give up; Whitman was determined to make a revised copy to prove that he resembled an American poet. One of Whitman’s poems that he revised was called “The Soul, Reaching, Throwing Out for Love,” which Whitman improved and called “A Noiseless, Patient Spider.” One way Whitman improved his poem was through the content. One part of the content Whitman changed was the controlling image. In Whitman’s original poem there are two controlling images, but both of them are unrealistic. One of the controlling images was a spider looking for love, which was not likely because a spider doesn’t seek love. The second controlling image was the spider in an ocean, which couldn’t be true because a spider would drown in an ocean. However, in the revised the controlling image was the “noiseless patient spider” looking for any connection and trying to from “the bridge” (1. 1, 2.9).
Another aspect Whitman changed was the topic of the poem. In the …show more content…

For Instance, Whitman’s original poem, “The Soul, Reaching, Throwing Out for Love” related to the comrade agenda because the focus of the poem was finding gay love. Since the poem addressed gay love, many people disagreed and disliked his poem, therefore, Whitman’s poem failed. However, Whitman’s new improved poem fit within Whitman's stated agenda, that he was an American Poet because his new poem brought America closer together. Even though the poem didn’t discuss America, it excluded the word “love,” which also made Whitman’s revised poem relate to High Romanticism. Since “A Noiseless, Patient Spider” was about finding any connection, not specifically gay love, it made the High Romantics interested in reading Whitman’s

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