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Aa100 Critical Review

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This critique will use evidence drawn from comments made by AA100 course tutor Dr Sandra Buckland. Further factors encountered during this learning experience are evidenced accordingly. These include contributions from support agencies and sources of academic improvement. The course has been absorbing and rewarding while the experience has reshaped my outlook on life. Studying with the Open University has also reshaped my private life. This critical review begins with a favourite subject area encountered in AA100.
‘Book 3 Cultural Encounters’ presented a tough, yet stimulating module. With ‘Book 2 Tradition and Dissent Plato on Tradition and Belief’ providing a difficult challenge. This involved a lot of thought which distracted my attention …show more content…

The task also required an essay plan. According to my tutor I provided a,
‘Good answer with detailed analysis presenting a coherent argument’ (TMA FORM PT3e: TMA No 04’, 2015).
Nevertheless, with the exception of TMA 02, a reflective commentary, my marks had provided an alarming consistency with ‘67’ being awarded for TMA No 04. While fully immersing myself in the subject matter my lack of skill and experience in effective English language became exposed. My tutor further remarked,
‘. . . Need to focus more attention on grammar and organising your work into more effective paragraphs’ (TMA FORM PT3e: TMA No 04’, 2015).
Consequently, I approached TMA 05 with an essay plan and a continually vigorous understanding of subject matter. This became the spine of a first draft. A strategy, to command a thorough grammatical examination, to assist in overcoming my weaknesses, required execution. However, disaster struck as my wife fractured her hip. During the emotional and physical burden of this period, sandwiching in effective study time became difficult. The only remaining option appeared to be an application for an extension to the TMA 05 cut-off date. Ashamedly, the only workable actions resulted in the reduction of the content of the first draft, to a satisfactory word limit and submit the

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