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Alixander And Ingender Character Analysis

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I like the direction that this draft goes in. It explores the minds of mentally ill people, such as Alixander and Indigo. However, with each case they have different problems. I enjoy the childish nature that Indigo has, creating a contrasting trait from Alixander. He acts much more stable, but when examining his actions, his instability shows. Although Indigo needs to display this nature, I feel myself seeing her as an actual child instead of "a young woman" (1). I think a hint to illustrate her age will help me picture her as that age because I picture a child with an adult and I don't believe that's the intention. I also like how the reader are dropped in the present, but then Alixander tells the story. I feel as if the story should end

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