BLUE DEVIL is based on true events. While stories about sexual abuse are not new to the industry, this is a story that needs to be told. The story sends a potent message about the aftermath of sexual abuse and the stigma it holds. The story is driven by themes about justice and redemption.
However, to be successful, the structure needs to be further developed and reorganized to provide for a more powerful storyline.
The current structure hinders the storytelling and feels fragmented. One concern about the presentation is the lack of a well-identified protagonist that drives the story. The script opens as if this is James’ story to tell. The first half of the script focuses mainly on James’ and his inner emotional turmoil and struggle
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It would benefit the script to reorganize the events. The idea of the lawsuit and the investigation into the cover-up is very compelling and would definitely make for a solid film. It’s this part of the story that is the most engaging.
However, the script needs to be restructured. First, select whose story is going to be told. It can be Scott’s story or Doyle’s story. It can be structured similar to the films PHILADELPHIA or A CIVIL ACTION.
The story could actually open up with the suicide of James and then Scott learning about the suicide. At the funeral Scott is determined to get justice (goal) and there’s conflict among the men about filing a lawsuit or not. Some will support it and others won’t. This will create good conflict. Keith will have to tell his family.
Maybe Scott approaches Doyle, who could be initially reluctant to take the case, but then he’s locked into the quest. This would be the first act break.
Act two would focus on the quest for justice, as they investigate the allegations and look for evidences. The courtroom side of this story is so powerful and creates good tension with the initial dismissal of the court case, which elicits great indignation for the audience. The attorney finding a loophole to bring the case back to the courtroom is clever and inspirational. The investigation/courtroom story is fascinating and definitely can be compelling, but only if structured more effectively.
In the second act, create a strong all is
Throughout the novel, Jimmy’s voice is a constant source of insight for the reader. He has a light-hearted yet astute way of looking at things. His unique and memorable viewpoint on the situations he finds himself in can at times horrify the reader, yet at other times can instil hope. Jimmy has a way of imprinting
Conflict was used effectively in the short story to reveal the theme of the story. The boy has an internal conflict about which parent to stay with, and because his father left, he seemed to have favored him. He wanted him back so badly that every night, he watches him on the six o’clock news while wearing his old jackets. He was blinded by his father’s sudden departure that he forgot about what is really important. Additionally, another development in the short story’s conflict has been used effectively to reveal the theme. When the boy went to Macdonald’s to see his father’s true colors, he thought: “I finished my drink quickly, thankful that he had to be back in the studio for the news.” By the time he saw his dad for the first time in a while, he knew he was not the man he thought he was. At that moment, he also realized that he lost sight of what he had all this time: His mother’s unconditional love. If it wasn’t for the characterization of
protagonists and antagonists, the plot structure and events of the story and the way he
• What are the characters’ emotions, attitudes, and behaviors? What do these indicate to the reader about the character?
Thus, the narrator’s father dealt with the same struggle that the narrator and Sonny are facing now. The narrator wants to protect his brother from the darkness of the world that has always threatened to invade their lives but he fails to do so as he is torn by his emotions, which shift quickly from love to hate and he is also unable to express his emotions, feelings and concern towards Sonny.
There is an absence of men in the novel. James is one of the few men seen throughout the story and because of this, the story suggests that he holds a lot of power. He is a difficult character to understand because his true intentions and feelings are hidden beneath what is being portrayed on the outside. James begins as someone who is displayed as positive, respectful and loving of women, but as the story progresses, it is revealed that he views women more as a sexual object or a slave to men. He tricks the reader into believing that he values and considers women as equals to
One of the themes was the burden of secrets that were kept. As a young boy, James knew very little about his mother’s childhood background. James’s mother Ruth discouraged his curiosity about her past and her background. She really never wanted her kids to know the things that she went through as a child and as a young adult. She was ashamed of the things that she went through, so she kept everything inside.What I think is going to happen is that James is that he is gonna have to realize that he can not be out doing drugs and skipping school. also he is going to have to grow up really fast.
This is fueled by, not only the changing emotions that teenagers typically endure, but also by the death of his stepfather, whom he saw as his own father. After his death, James cannot bear to see his mother suffer, for she no longer knows how to control the dynamics of the family and "wandered in an emotional stupor for nearly a year." James instead turns to alcohol and drugs, dropping out of school to play music and go around with his friends, which James refers to as "my own process of running, emotionally disconnecting myself from her, as if by doing to I could keep her suffering from touching me." Instead of turning to his family and becoming "the king in the house, the oldest kid," James "spent as much time away from home as possible absolve[ing] [himself] of all responsibility " As a result, Ruth sends James to live with his older half sister and her husband, in an attempt to straighten her out her son's life. James distracts himself with the life he found there, spending the summers on a street corner with his half sister's husband, Big Richard, whom he adores, and the unique men that frequented the area. During these summers, James discovers "[He] could hide. No one knew [him]. No one knew [his] past, [his] white mother, [his] dead father, nothing. It was perfect. [His] problems seemed far, far away." Instead of facing the realities of loss and anger in his family, James seeks distractions
The book begins talks about other conflicts that arose with James and Ruth. James took a downward spiral during his teenage years,
Lester’s presence drags the rest of the characters down a dismal road of hostages, hatred, and suicide. Had Dubus omitted him from the novel, the conflict could have resolved itself in a non-violent manner. However, by adding Lester’s third-person point of view to the first-person perspectives of Kathy and Behrani, Dubus transforms the story into a three-dimensional
The epistolary structure of the novel and the subsequent use of multiple narrators forces the reader to judge for themselves what is true and what is dramatized from the letters. Due to the story being retold from the point of view of Victor the reader is more likely to understand why Victor and Walton deem the monster a malevolent and insensitive brute.
Prior to taking this course I wouldn’t be able to explain the differences or even be able to compare it to the criminal justice system. However, I now have a better understanding of how the criminal justice system works. This movie takes place in the southern state of Alabama and revolves around two teenagers accused of killing a store clerk. Throughout this essay I will explain the legal processes that appeared in the film as well as the processes that did not appear in the film.
First, let’s review the characters in the main story, of which there are few in the literary story
James is learning to be stronger. He wants to hug his mother and comfort her, and his teeth hurt him so bad he wants to cry. Octavia tells him that crying displays weakness. He knows that his teeth need to be seen by a dentist but he thinks about how they do not have that much money, and that is a sacrifice he will make. James is thinking about the family, and knows that money can go towards something else.
Readers are given an invaluable source of background information and context in the first portion of the novel, which allows for readers to have a starting point to work off of in regards to understanding what obstacles destiny will throw at the characters during the rest of their mission. For instance, Marlow is described in depth and the novel illustrates his development from one perspective to another as he grapples with the vast spectrum and realities of humankind. While the journey unfolds, imagery also begins to become a key role in moving the storyline along and providing crucial