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Both Ways Is The Only Way I Want It By Maile Meloy

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Perhaps one of the most challenging aspects of writing fiction is figuring out how to write dialogue with vivid subtext. The character’s words must have different layers to them: what they are actually saying, what they are trying to say, and why they are saying it. People very rarely speak without intention, even if they themselves are not consciously aware of what that intention is. Maile Meloy’s collection of short stories titled Both Ways is the Only Way I Want It is filled with rich dialogue that drives the story forward and delivers information in a natural and deliberate way. One specific story that demonstrates this well is “O Tannenbaum,” where what is being said very rarely coincides with what the characters are actually thinking, …show more content…

After getting their car stolen, Bonnie and Clyde are dropped off at the police station, where Everett makes plans to have the couple over to help decorate the Christmas tree after they file the police report. Everett promises to come back for the couple, telling them that he will “go home and unload, and then come back and get you both.” Upon their arrival home, however, Pam responds to Everett’s promise by locking him out of their house, making him say that he will not go back to get the couple in order for her to let him inside. But, seemingly out of boredom, Pam eventually ends up permitting Everett to pick up the couple from the police station, convincing Clyde to come for Anne Marie’s sake. While waiting in the car for Clyde to finish up paper work, Bonnie and Everett share an intimate, anticipated kiss. Although, neither of their spouses find out about the kiss, we get the feeling throughout the whole story that the characters have a mutual and unspoken understanding of the chemistry between Everett and Bonnie, similar to the chemistry between Pam and …show more content…

Every word in each of her stories has a purpose, and the story would not have the same affect if any piece of dialogue were to be removed. For example, after Pam uses Anne Marie as an excuse to get Clyde and Bonnie over, Everett asks Anne Marie if she would like to come along for the ride to go get them, Anne Marie replies by saying “I’ll stay here.” In order for Everett and Bonnie to have their intimate moment in the car, Anne Marie could not be with them. As a result, Anne Marie would have had to say no when her father asked her to come along for the ride. So, why include this dialogue in the story at all? Considering that Anne Marie has just heard her mother on the phone talking about how excited she’d be to show off the tree, it is unusual that she would not feel compelled to go along for the ride and meet up with the interesting strangers. This small piece of dialogue completes the pictures that Meloy has been painting for the reader about what is underneath this seemingly ideal family. We can infer that four-year-old Anne Marie has at least a vague idea that something isn’t right and is simply playing along for her parents. Decorating the tree by herself and humming Christmas carols, Anne Marie successfully manages to muffle the reality of the situation going on around her. Without this piece of dialogue, Anne Marie’s place in the story would be

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