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Commentary on the poem Night of the Scorpion Essay

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Commentary on the poem Night of the Scorpion

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The poem “Night of the Scorpion”, written by Nissin Ezekiel has an interesting contrast of good and bad hidden within it (an essence of equality). The poet has made the mother’s experience of getting bitten by a scorpion sound very painful and endless. The poet has conveyed this by using some descriptive language. E.g. “May the poison purify your flesh of desire, and your spirit of ambition”. This poem which was written by the first person, has other techniques such as; alliteration – “I watched the flame feeding on my mother”; tone of voice (short sentences giving a tense atmosphere) – “My father, sceptic, rationalist, trying every excuse and blessing”.

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It is the substance which could determine the way a person will life their lives (if they survive form the sting). It will either make people realize that they should stop doing bad things or to make them be thankful of what they have.

The last line, “My mother only said thank God the scorpion picked on me and spared my children”, is a series of connotations. It creates the impression that a scorpion is very dangerous and also that it doesn’t aim on innocent people (children) but on adults (mother). The final sentence shows us the love that the mother has for her children; she would rather have herself got bitten by the scorpion rather than her children. It sounds thankful and also relieved. The mother is thankful and relieved that it is all over and that her children didn’t have to go through what she went through. It provides a nice ending to all of the horrible pain and suffering she had experienced (happy feeling). Moreover, this text presents a number of powerful imagery. One example of a metaphor is “to paralyse the Evil One”. The Evil One here represents the scorpion. An example of another type of imagery; a simile is “The peasants came like swarms of flies”. The poet describes the people like swarms of flies, which give the audience the feeling that there are lots of them coming at the same time (unpleasant and black). More interesting words that the poet has chosen include; “- flash of diabolic

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