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Comparing and Constrasting the Poems of Issa and Paul Muldoon

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Option 1 (Poetry)
Task 1 Compare and Contrast Poems by Issa and Paul Muldoon
I intend to demonstrate that both poems largely follow the rules of haiku. However, they achieve their effects by using different techniques. Despite the fact that the contexts of the two poems set them apart, both poems can be thought of as having similar meanings.
Baugh et al (2006 p57 to p60) give 9 rules of haiku, which I shall use to compare the two poems. I shall then use the study diamond to comment on the effects the poems have on me, the techniques used, the contexts of the two poems and their meanings.
Muldoon’s poem has seventeen syllables whereas Issa’s contains only twelve. Both poems are of three lines, but only Muldoon’s has the 5-7-5 haiku …show more content…

Haiku should contain a reference to, or suggestion of, a season. In Issa’s poem, melting snow indicates winter. In Muldoon’s poem, a snowball presages the mention of winter.
The two poems had are very different effects on me. Muldoon’s poem moves smoothly to a clear message about the nature of man and winter. The poem achieves this by the use of assonance and rhyme. Baugh et al (2006 p42 p48) describe the techniques of rhyme and assonance. The presence of ‘or’ sounds in core and porcelain link the first and second lines. The Concise Oxford Dictionary of Literary Terms (Chris Baldick, OUP, 2004 p20) states, ‘assonance…. is distinct from rhyme in that the consonants differ although the vowels match’, so these ‘or’ sounds can be classed as rhymes within words rather than assonance. Both words match with door at the end of the final line and Muldoon also uses an end rhyme, rhyming ‘core’ with ‘door’.
Issa’s poem jarred me out of my habitual thoughts concerning melting snow, villages and children, with the startling image of children falling on a village. The poem uses little poetic technique except the rhyming ‘il’ sounds within the words village and children linking these two words together.
The contexts of the two poems are very different. Encarta (2005) states Issa lived in Japan from 1763 to 1827. At which time Zen Buddhism was present in Japan. Paul Muldoon is a prize winning contemporary Irish poet living in the USA, who has published

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