David's Observation

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You included a lot of descriptions on your observation to help present a visualization of the kitchen. In addition, the transition from describing the environment to client was nicely executed. The major steps of David's movements are well-written and straight to the point. As a matter of fact, I found it interesting how David preferred to write his name and the date after completing his assignment instead of writing it in the beginning. It is also fascinating to see how a young child, such as David, value education because he understands the importance of his family's money. Also, the examples of work for different lifespan were well-thought-out.

Overall, your writing is very clear and transitioned very well. The only time I was a bit confused
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