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Essay On 8th Grade Advancement

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I strongly contradict with your decision to cancel our 8th grade advancement and the dance following it . I am very confident by writing this letter you will reconsider the decision you have made. There is no reason strong enough to cancel the 8th grade advancement. The 8th grade advancement and dance has been a tradition at BTMS for many years. It is an event that most students look forward to starting at the beginning of the school year. My opinion and probably many other students to is that you shouldn't cancel it.
Some of the reasons that I feel that the advancement and the dance should continue to be an event is because numbers of students have already begun planning for it. A handful of girls has already begun to look at dresses and shoes for this event. Shopping for dresses is very time consuming. Also, a few girls have already purchased items for the dance. If the dance is cancelled, parents have already put money toward the event for nothing. …show more content…

There have already been a few meetings to begin planning this event and many parents eager to help. As a result of the dance being cancelled, parents have put forward their time and effort for absolutely nothing. Lastly I have spoken to a few students have told me their long distance relatives are coming to see them advance. You wouldn’t want to take away an opportunity for students to feel proud in front of relatives they don't see very often because of distance.
In conclusion, this is why I feel we shouldn't have our advancement and dance cancelled. This event is a moment for many students to feel proud of their accomplishments. It is our last event as middle schoolers and a time where we could make memories to cherish forever. I hope you reconsider your decision about the

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