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Heaven Shoemaker-Personal Narrative

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Heaven shoemaker Narrative 2 FLASHDRAFT As I walked down the hallway my friend said ”Have you ever had a puppy” “No” I replied as I walked into the office. My mom and brother were waiting for me sitting in the chair. It was a cold winter day so I put on my big winter coat and big boots, that absorbed me .We walked out of the school and went in the car, are black car looked like it turned white with all the snow, with are snowy footprints trailing behind us, “It was as cold as Antarctica “ I said to my mom “ Why did you need to pick Hunter and me up” I asked “not that I wanted to stay” I thought to myself. “ Your cousin got in a really bad car accident, She is lucky, she almost was parallelized”. I thought to myself while my heart dropped “ Nothing would be good today” …show more content…

My mom slowed down and we pulled into this house, the first thing I thought is this is the wrong house, or why did we come here? I got out of the car and walked close by my mom and brother. We knocked and walked in their huge garage on the side sat a little cage with 6 golden brown fuzzy little puppies.I took a step towards the cage I counted “1,2,3,4,5,6 puppies!” I yelled in my head She’s lucky she has six puppies, I don’t even have one I thought to myself You can get in the cage with them if you want, I didn’t hesitate and I ran to the cage my little brother following behind me. I looked at my mom the only boy sitting in my lap chewing on my finger while the girls surrounded Hunter.This day couldn’t get any better I thought to myself even though she got in a car accident. “Heaven you can pick one puppy but make sure your brother wants to have the same puppy”she said “Hunter what puppy do you want” I asked “The boy” he replied “Same” I said “Mom we know which one we want” I said “which one” she asked “the boy” I said I picked him

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