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How To Write An Excerpt From Lord Of The Flies

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Imagine being deserted on an unknown, unmapped island, surrounded by peers you ought to get to know. Well, that’s what happened to me, Eliza, and my classmates from London Intermediate Academy. We never expected this to happen as it did, but one day the soldiers rushed the boys and girls on separate airplanes and set us off. That day I was separated from my family, my brother Ralph and my best friend Simon. Many never made it because of a crash caused by enemy fire, and others landed on the island wounded and sick. We never heard from the boys on the other plane, or if it had been shot down too. But for a long while we will be stuck on this dreaded island, yearning for rescue.

… It has been about a month now, and we have all grown accustomed to being on the island. The first day went quickly and quietly, due to the fact that none of the girls bothered to introduce themselves out of pure shyness. As the weeks passed by, our mental and physical wounds had begun to heal, and we had learned about each others …show more content…

I began to think of how the island would be if Ralph and his mates were in our situation. Simon, my friend since petite school, was the church boy, he was smart and rarely did bad. Ralph was adventurous and keen. Of course, they would end up in arguments and boys will be boys. Different senecrious crossed my mind that night. If I was on an island full of boys, I'm sure I would be sent off to do the boys laundry and gather berries; “girl work”. But unlike what they might think, the girls on the island are very organized, we each have tasks, we each contribute, and we rotate takes every day. Marley is a good chief that keeps things orderly, unlike her brother Jack, who likes to take control of everything. But all the thoughts drifted away as I went back to the huts and prepared for the next days

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