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Insane Homework Load

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The author of the article “My insane Homework Load Taught Me How To Game The System”, Elif Koc, wanted to explain how her homework load caused her and her friends to find a way to complete their schoolwork with minimized efforts. On a daily basis, she was overwhelmed with the amount of work her teachers dumped on her. She was forced to increase her efficiency, by less than ethical means, in order to survive high school. Her attitude was very realistic, albeit unforgiving. She knows that her teachers would have been upset with her, and would have been upset with their students if they were caught doing what the rest of their grade is guaranteed to be participating in. Although she does not show any remorse for her actions and argues that it is the fault of the education system, as its expectations are misguided. She would do enough work of her homework that her teacher would think she had done the assignment. Koc learned how to be a good student, not a good learner.
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Since her argument is that she did nothing wrong by cutting corners, she had to be careful to construct a well rounded reasoning. She uses an emotional appeal at her opening by describing what her computer tabs are filled with: an overwhelming slew of desperate google searches and academic sites. It makes the viewer realize that she was very stressed and it must have been a lot to cope with, along with all of her extracurriculars. She then uses a logical appeal by talking about Junior year and all of its baggage. She gives an objective argument that this is the hardest and most stressful time of High School, and how she was, fairly, concerned about her grades and colleges. After that, she follows up with an ethical appeal, and says that the education system should not be structured this way, and it should be creating good learners, who are actually invested in education, and not students, who are invested in

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